Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prepared typing on computer. In my case I am studying in university so I need to do my homework on my computer. If I use typing I can easy to make my mistake on report.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I type on laptop keyboard every days. I am a overseas university student so I need to take my computer outside such as cafe or library or school.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned how to type on keyboard in secondary school. In my school I need to type a Chinese in computer. So we have a computer lesson to teach me how to type on a keyboard.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I have a runway to improve my typing. I love to chat with my friends so we also online chatting in Facebook or Instagram every night I can practice my typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 54.0Sugestão: 回答要更直接并且语法更准确。开头给出明确的观点(例如:I prefer typing),然后用一两句具体原因支持,避免自相矛盾(你说喜欢打字但又说容易出错,应解释如何弥补错误)。注意时态和单复数,以及词组搭配(easily, make mistakes)。句子不要过长,保持清晰。
Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because most of my university assignments need to be submitted online. Also, typing lets me edit and correct mistakes easily using spell-check and track changes.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 注意语法和词汇的正确使用,特别是冠词、复数和形容词位置(a/ an/ the, every day vs everyday, overseas student)。先给出简短直接答案,然后补充具体场景和频率,使用连接词使表述更连贯。
Exemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I'm an overseas university student and often take my laptop to cafes, the library, or campus for studying.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 52.0Sugestão: 回答要更自然并提供具体细节。用清晰的时间短语(e.g. when I was in secondary school)并解释学习内容(比如练习拼音输入、盲打训练等)。避免直译中文结构,注意冠词和单词顺序。
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in secondary school. We had computer classes where we practiced Chinese input methods and basic typing skills, which helped me become faster and more accurate.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 回答要具体并使用合适词汇(如 practice, improve, online chatting)。不要用不恰当的比喻(runway)。说明具体方法和频率,并可提及练习效果或计划(例如使用练习软件、定时练习)。用连接词使句子流畅。
Exemplo: I improve my typing mainly by chatting with friends online every night, which gives me regular practice. I also use typing tutor websites and set aside 10–15 minutes daily to do speed and accuracy exercises.
× I prepared typing on computer.
✓ I prefer typing on the computer.
句子原本用過去式“prepared”但語境是在表達偏好,應使用現在時。且慣用說法為“prefer typing on the computer”。建議使用現在時表達一般事實或習慣:把“prepared”改為“prefer”,並加上定冠詞“the”。
× In my case I am studying in university so I need to do my homework on my computer.
✓ In my case, I am studying at university, so I need to do my homework on my computer.
“study in university”不如“study at university”地道;句子時態使用現在進行表示正在學習,這是正確的,但需要加逗號分隔原因從句。建議使用“study at university”並在寫作中使用逗號分隔短語。
× If I use typing I can easy to make my mistake on report.
✓ If I type, I can easily make mistakes in my reports.
語法錯誤包括:1) “use typing” 不自然,應用動詞“type”;2) “can easy to make” 結構錯誤,副詞應為“easily”且不加“to”;3) “my mistake on report” 應為複數“mistakes”且慣用介詞為“in my reports”。因此改為“if I type, I can easily make mistakes in my reports”。
× I type on laptop keyboard every days.
✓ I type on my laptop keyboard every day.
錯誤點在於“every days”應為“every day”(日常頻率副詞,單數形式),並且缺少所有格“my”與定冠詞或所有格來表明是哪個鍵盤。建議使用“my laptop keyboard every day”。
× I am a overseas university student so I need to take my computer outside such as cafe or library or school.
✓ I am an overseas university student, so I need to take my computer outside to places such as cafés, libraries, or school.
錯誤包括:1) 冠詞錯誤“a overseas”應為“an overseas”;2) “such as cafe or library or school” 列舉應使用復數或一致格式並加冠詞,且“café”更自然;3) 建議加入介詞“to places”使語意更清楚。中文建議:注意元音發音決定使用 a 或 an,並在列舉時保持格式一致及用複數或冠詞。
× I learned how to type on keyboard in secondary school.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard in secondary school.
主要是冠詞遺漏:“type on keyboard”應為“type on a keyboard”。時態使用過去式“learned”是正確的,因為動作發生在過去。建議在類似句子中補上不定冠詞。
× In my school I need to type a Chinese in computer.
✓ At my school I needed to type Chinese on the computer.
錯誤包括:1) 冠詞誤用“a Chinese”——在此處“Chinese”為語言,不加冠詞;2) 介詞應為“on the computer”而非“in computer”;3) 時態如果描述過去習慣用過去式“needed”更合適(在學校的情況)。建議把語言名詞不加不定冠詞,並使用正確介詞和時態。
× So we have a computer lesson to teach me how to type on a keyboard.
✓ So we had a computer lesson that taught us how to type on a keyboard.
原句人稱和時態不一致:開頭用過去背景(在中學),但原句使用現在時“have”且“to teach me”不自然。改為過去式“had”並使用“taught us”更符合語境且語法更通順。中文建議:描述過去經歷時,保持動詞在過去式並讓主語和賓語一致。
× I have a runway to improve my typing.
✓ I have a way to improve my typing.
“runway”意思為跑道,與文意不符。應用“way”或“method”。建議注意詞彙選擇,使用與語境匹配的名詞。
× I love to chat with my friends so we also online chatting in Facebook or Instagram every night I can practice my typing.
✓ I love chatting with my friends, so we chat online on Facebook or Instagram every night and I can practice my typing.
原句結構混亂:1) “we also online chatting” 詞序錯誤,應為“we chat online”;2) “in Facebook or Instagram” 介詞應為“on Facebook or Instagram”;3) 缺少連接詞和標點分隔,造成句子冗長。改為現在時的習慣性表達“chat online ... every night”並用“and”連接結果。中文建議:保持動詞形式一致,使用正確介詞,並用逗號/連詞連接獨立分句。