Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing because I think typing is more faster and nowadays umm people use mobile phones everyday and we typing entirely every day so I used to it.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, I typing every day umm because when I was umm studied or work I need typing and when I send e-mail to someone or send a message to someone I need to type.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
ARM is a good question. I would say it's UMM. In my primary school we have umm computer class and the teachers will teach me how to type and we we practice typing and on the class and so I learn it.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I I write an e-mail or studies on on laptops every day so I need a lot of typing so I think it's the way I improve my typing ability.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 在回答时要更自然、语法正确并减少犹豫语(如"umm")。先给出简洁的主题句,然后用1-2个具体理由并用连接词衔接,比如提到速度、方便性或可编辑性。注意动词形态(e.g. "more faster" 应为 "faster"),并避免冗长重复。
Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly edit and share documents on my phone or laptop, which saves time when I'm working or studying.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 回答要直接并用正确时态,避免重复表达。先用主题句说明你每天使用哪种设备,然后用具体情境支持(如学习、工作、发送邮件)。用连接词(because, for example)让句子连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, I type every day, mostly on a laptop because I use it for both work and study. For example, I write reports for work and send emails, so the laptop keyboard is my main tool.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 避免开场填充词和重复(如"ARM"、"UMM"、重复的"we"). 先直接回答时间点,然后简要描述学习过程并用过去时。尽量用更准确的表达("primary school" 后用过去式)。
Exemplo: I learned to type in primary school during our computer classes. The teacher taught us proper finger placement, and we practiced typing exercises in class until I became comfortable with the keyboard.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 57.0Sugestão: 回答要清晰具体,避免重复词。说明具体的方法和频率,并可以提到效果或计划(例如练习速度、使用打字软件)。用连接词(for example, by doing this)增强连贯性。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing every day—writing emails and doing study tasks on my laptop. For example, I also use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer typing because I think typing is more faster and nowadays umm people use mobile phones everyday and we typing entirely every day so I used to it.
✓ I prefer typing because I think typing is faster, and nowadays people use mobile phones every day and we type almost entirely every day, so I'm used to it.
句中“more faster”是冗余比较级,正确用法为“faster”。“everyday”应为副词短语“every day”(表示“每天”)。“we typing”缺少动词形式,应为“we type”。“I used to it”用法错误,表示习惯应使用“I'm used to it”。建议:避免双重比较级,区分“everyday”(形容词)和“every day”(副词短语),注意主语后用完整谓语动词,以及用被动/形容词结构表示习惯。
× Yes, I typing every day umm because when I was umm studied or work I need typing and when I send e-mail to someone or send a message to someone I need to type.
✓ Yes, I type every day, because when I was studying or working I needed to type, and when I send an e-mail or a message to someone I need to type.
“I typing”应使用动词原形或适当时态“I type”。“when I was studied or work”结构混乱:动词需用现在分词作进行或作过去进行时,正确为“when I was studying or working”。“I need typing”错误,应为“I needed to type”(过去)或“I need to type”(一般现在)。另外“send e-mail”前面通常加冠词“an e-mail”。建议:注意动词时态一致,进行时使用动词-ing形式,搭配“need to do”而不是“need doing/need noun”。
× ARM is a good question. I would say it's UMM. In my primary school we have umm computer class and the teachers will teach me how to type and we we practice typing and on the class and so I learn it.
✓ That's a good question. I would say... In my primary school we had computer class and the teachers taught us how to type. We practiced typing in class, so I learned it.
“ARM is a good question”是错误短语,应为“That’s a good question”。“I would say it's UMM”口语填充词,应改为“I would say...”或省略。时态应保持过去时:“we had computer class”,“teachers taught us”,“we practiced... in class”,“I learned it”。“teach me”在描述一般课堂情形可以用“taught us”。重复“we we”为笔误。建议:使用合适的引导短语,保持时态一致(过去经历用过去时),避免重复与多余填充词。
× I I write an e-mail or studies on on laptops every day so I need a lot of typing so I think it's the way I improve my typing ability.
✓ I write e-mails or study on laptops every day, so I do a lot of typing. I think that's how I improve my typing ability.
“I I”重复,去掉多余部分。“write an e-mail”应使用复数或泛指“write e-mails”以匹配“every day”。“studies”应为动词“study”。“on on”重复。“I need a lot of typing”表达不自然,改为“I do a lot of typing”。最后一句用“that's how”更自然。建议:注意单复数一致,主谓结构清晰,避免重复单词,使用自然固定搭配(do typing, write e-mails)。