Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 在回答中注意语法和句子简洁性，避免重复和口头语（如 "uh", "umm"）。可以先给出明确的观点，然后用一到两句具体理由支持，包含具体场景或例子，使内容更有说服力和细节。

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because the physical act of writing helps me focus. For example, I often write study notes and personal cards by hand, and the tangible result feels more personal and meaningful.

Sugestão: 回答要完整并避免句子未完成，减少语气词。直接回答后补充一到两条具体原因，使用连词（because, so, therefore）连接句子，注意语法和时态。

Exemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I often move between my dorm and classrooms, so a laptop is more convenient. Also, the MacBook Air keyboard is comfortable and quiet, which helps me work for long periods.

Sugestão: 注意主谓一致和用词准确，避免重复表达。先给出时间点，然后说明学习方式和细节（比如课程、软件或练习内容），使用连词使句子流畅。

Exemplo: I learned to type in middle school when our class took a basic typing course. We used a typing app that guided us with exercises to improve speed and accuracy.

Sugestão: 回答应更具体，给出练习方法和频率，避免重复和语法错误。用一到两句说明具体策略（例如每天练习多长时间、使用哪种练习或设定目标），并用连接词衔接。

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising every day for about 20 minutes using a typing app. The app turns drills into games, so I set weekly goals to increase my accuracy and speed.

× I would say I prefer handwriting because I love the sound of pen and pencil on the paper and that makes me very concentrated.

✓ I would say I prefer handwriting because I love the sound of a pen and a pencil on the paper and that helps me concentrate.

句中缺少不定冠词“a”，应为“a pen and a pencil”。另外“makes me very concentrated”用法不自然，英语中常用“help/helps me concentrate”或“make me feel very focused”。建议使用“helps me concentrate”。

× And also I think a handwriting card, uh, give it to my friend is a great way to show my respect and my love.

✓ Also, I think a handwritten card to give to my friend is a great way to show my respect and love.

“a handwriting card”表达不正确，应该用“a handwritten card”或“handwritten card”。原句中“give it to my friend”位置和形式不自然，改为不定式短语“to give to my friend”。“my respect and my love”中可省去第二个所有格冠词，简洁地说“my respect and love”。

× Umm, I type on a laptop keyboard everyday because I have to move to uh, move from dorm to my classroom and uh, the laptop is very convenient to carry and the MacBook Air keyboard is very soft and doesn't.

✓ Umm, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have to move from the dorm to my classroom, and the laptop is very convenient to carry. The MacBook Air keyboard is very soft and isn't tiring to use.

“everyday”与“every day”混用；这里应为副词短语“every day”。“move from dorm”缺少定冠词，应为“move from the dorm”。原句最后省略未完成（"doesn't"后应有补语），需补全为“isn't tiring to use”或其他完整表达。句子冗长，建议拆成两个句子。

× Umm, I think I learned it from the middle school.

✓ Umm, I think I learned it in middle school.

英文中通常说“learned in middle school”而不是“from the middle school”。介词应为“in”，且一般不加定冠词“the”。

× Everybody in my class have to learn that basic typing skills.

✓ Everybody in my class has to learn those basic typing skills.

主语“Everybody”是单数，谓语动词应使用“has”而不是“have”。“that basic typing skills”中“that”与复数“skills”不匹配，应改为“those”。

× Umm, we also use an app to tell talk to teach us how to type quiet, uh, quickly and accurately.

✓ Umm, we also used an app to teach us how to type quickly and accurately.

原句中“use an app to tell talk to teach us”重复且语序混乱，应简化为“used an app to teach us”。根据语境为过去时用“used”。“quiet”拼写错误或用词错误，应为“quite”或更恰当的“quickly”；此处需副词“quickly”。

× And it's simply just practice day by day and use that app.

✓ And it's simply just practicing day by day and using that app.

结构上并列动词需要保持形式一致，应使用动名词“practicing... and using...”而不是原来动词不一致的短语。此外“simply just”重复，建议保留其中一个，但为了忠实原意保留both可改成“simply just practicing...”也可简化为“just practicing...”。

× It's kind of like a game.

✓ It's kind of like a game.

该句语法正确，无需修改。保留原句。

× And when you learn it, you are such you are actually feel very happy because you are playing a game.

✓ And when you learn it, you actually feel very happy because you are playing a game.

原句有多余的“you are such you are”，造成冗余和语法错误。应简化为“you actually feel very happy”。此外“learn it”在此处可以保留，意思是掌握打字技能。