Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., 'it's' or 'it is'), and avoid contradictory reasoning (editing is easier when typing). Add one brief specific reason for each preference and use a linking word.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting for short notes because I can jot ideas down quickly and it feels more personal. However, for longer documents or essays I prefer typing because it is faster and makes editing and formatting much easier.

Sugestão: Combine sentences to be concise and correct grammar. Start with a direct answer, then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' and 'also'). Avoid repetition ('have to' used many times).

Exemplo: Yes, I type every day because my job involves creating and editing documents, and I also regularly write and send emails. As a result, I use a desktop or laptop keyboard for several hours most workdays.

Sugestão: Use correct past tense and a clear time reference. Start with a topic sentence ('I learned when I was...'), then give brief specifics about how you learned using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., 'had to learn', 'we learned how to position our fingers').

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. At school we had lessons where we practiced proper finger placement and exercises to increase speed and accuracy.

Sugestão: Use past tense consistently and be concise. Start with a clear statement about the method you used, then give a specific example and a result. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly.

Exemplo: I improved my typing mainly by playing computer games when I was younger because the games required quick keyboard controls. As a result, my speed and accuracy increased significantly over time.

× Actually it depends.

✓ Actually, it depends.

Comma needed after introductory adverb 'Actually'. This is punctuation rather than tense but improves clarity; keep present tense 'depends' to match general preference statement.

× For the short note I prefer writing because it easier to edit it, but for the document or essay I prefer typing.

✓ For short notes I prefer handwriting because it is easier to edit them, but for documents or essays I prefer typing.

Plural forms should be used for general statements: 'short note' -> 'short notes', 'the document or essay' -> 'documents or essays'. Also 'writing' here is better as 'handwriting' to contrast with typing. Missing verb 'is' after 'it' (subject-verb agreement) and pronoun number: replace 'it' with 'them' to match plural 'notes'.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

Sentence is grammatically correct; present tense auxiliary 'do' matches question 'Do you...?' No change needed.

× My work is involved to create the document or edit it, so I have to do it almost every day.

✓ My work involves creating and editing documents, so I have to do that almost every day.

Incorrect verb construction 'is involved to create' should be active 'involves' followed by gerunds. Use plural 'documents' for generality and replace vague 'it' with 'that'.

× Moreover, I have to send an e-mail, so I have to use the keyboard.

✓ Moreover, I have to send emails, so I use the keyboard.

Use plural 'emails' for routine activity and avoid redundant 'have to' twice; present simple 'use' better expresses habitual action. Preposition use is fine; main issue was word choice and redundancy.

× When I was younger, I have to learn how to type on the keyboard.

✓ When I was younger, I had to learn how to type on the keyboard.

Sequence of time requires past tense: 'When I was younger' sets past context, so modal 'have to' should be past 'had to'.

× We learn how position the finger on the keyboard and how to move it.

✓ We learned how to position our fingers on the keyboard and how to move them.

Past tense 'learned' matches 'When I was younger'. 'Position the finger' is unnatural; use plural 'fingers' and possessive 'our' to reflect learners, and plural pronoun 'them' to agree with 'fingers'.

× Back then I play a game and it required to use a keyboard to control the character on the game, so I improve the typing skill a lot when I play it.

✓ Back then I played a game that required using a keyboard to control the character, so I improved my typing skills a lot when I played it.

Past time adverb 'Back then' requires past tense verbs: 'play' -> 'played', 'improve' -> 'improved'. 'Required to use' is awkward; use 'required using' or 'required me to use'. Use plural 'skills' and possessive 'my'. Remove redundant 'on the game' and simplify phrase.