Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing because I think it is faster than in writing and more convenient for daily use. However, when I'm reading a book, I will I prefer handwriting to write down some of my feelings.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, pretty much every day. I usually type on my laptop for school study.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Umm, I know how to type. It's uh, not particularly just productive natural because I take so much everyday for messages and study.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I improve my typing. Well, not really on purpose, I just type so much every day for messages and studying.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答基本清楚,但存在语法错误、重复和表达不够简洁。建议:1) 开头直接给出主题句并简洁说明原因;2) 使用连接词(however, but, when)时注意位置和结构;3) 修正重复与语法错误(如“I will I prefer”);4) 提供一两个具体例子说明何时会选择手写以增加细节。
Exemplo: I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient for daily tasks. However, when I'm reading a book, I sometimes handwrite notes to capture my personal thoughts and mark memorable quotes, which helps me remember them better.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: 回答简洁且相关,但可以更丰富具体:1) 在主题句后加少量细节,如使用频率、时长或具体用途;2) 使用连接词将细节连贯起来;3) 避免过度口语化表达(如“pretty much”可保留或换成“almost every day”根据正式程度)。
Exemplo: Yes, I type almost every day. I usually use my laptop for schoolwork, spending about two to three hours typing essays, notes and emails.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答不直接且语法混乱,缺少时间信息和清晰结构。建议:1) 直接用一句话说明学会的时间(例如“when I was X years old”或“in school”);2) 用一到两句补充说明学习方式或练习过程;3) 避免填充词(um, uh)并注意语法与流利度。
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was around ten years old at primary school. Since then I've practiced a lot by typing messages and school assignments, so my speed has gradually improved.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答表意清楚但过于简单且有重复。建议:1) 开头直接回答并说明是否有计划练习;2) 提供具体的方法或例子(例如在线练习、打字软件、定期练习时间);3) 使用连接词使句子更连贯并避免重复。
Exemplo: I mostly improved my typing by regular use—typing messages and assignments every day. Besides that, I sometimes use online typing tutorials and practice drills to improve my accuracy and speed.
× I prefer typing because I think it is faster than in writing and more convenient for daily use.
✓ I prefer typing because I think it is faster than writing and more convenient for daily use.
比较时不需要介词in,固定搭配是 "faster than writing"。句中应直接使用动名词writing作为比较对象,而不是 in writing。建议记住比较结构中常直接用动名词或名词短语。
× However, when I'm reading a book, I will I prefer handwriting to write down some of my feelings.
✓ However, when I'm reading a book, I prefer to handwrite some of my feelings.
句中有多余和冲突的助动词及表达("will I prefer" 不正确)。偏好表达用一般现在时或现在进行时都可,根据情景此处用一般现在时更自然。另外词语搭配应为 "prefer to handwrite" 或 "prefer handwriting",此处改为更简洁的 "prefer to handwrite"。建议避免把助动词will与prefer连用表达即时偏好。
× Yes, pretty much every day. I usually type on my laptop for school study.
✓ Yes, pretty much every day. I usually type on my laptop for studying at school.
短语 "for school study" 不自然,常用表达为 "for studying" 或 "for schoolwork"/"at school"。这里调整为 "for studying at school" 更符合习惯搭配。建议多记常见固定搭配:study 作名词时用 schoolwork,作动词时用 studying。
× Umm, I know how to type. It's uh, not particularly just productive natural because I take so much everyday for messages and study.
✓ Umm, I know how to type. It's not particularly natural or productive because I type so much every day for messages and study.
原句中时态、词序和词形有误:"not particularly just productive natural" 词序混乱且用词重复,应改为 "not particularly natural or productive"。动词应为 type(而不是 take),且 every day 写作两词。建议理清词序,注意常用形容词顺序和单词拼写(every day, type)。
× I improve my typing. Well, not really on purpose, I just type so much every day for messages and studying.
✓ I improved my typing. Well, not really on purpose — I just type so much every day for messages and studying.
如果指的是过去一段时间内能力提升,使用过去时 improved 更合适;若强调现在仍在进步可用 "I've improved" 或 "My typing has improved"。原句时态与语境不一致。建议根据要表达的时间范围选择现在完成时或过去时:若长期逐渐提升用现在完成时(I've improved);若指过去某段提升用过去时(I improved)。