Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I usually prefer typing because I have a quite experience about it and also I have quite bad handwriting.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I usually type on a desktop keyboard every day because I find it quite convenient. For instance, I actually work at the office and I have to.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned basic computer course during my childhood, but I expanded it whenever I completed my high risk studies and started to working in the office.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Improve my typing level by practicing every day and learn about. Your features from YouTube or other social media platforms also I used to.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: Be direct and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'quite experience' is incorrect). Give one brief reason and an example. Keep it under five sentences and avoid redundancy.
Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is messy and typing is faster. For example, when I take notes at work, I can type quickly and easily edit mistakes, which saves time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 64.0Sugestão: Open with a direct answer and give a specific supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and avoid vague phrases such as 'I have to' without context.
Exemplo: Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I work in an office that provides desktop computers. As a result, I am comfortable with a full-sized keyboard for long documents.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Give a clear time frame and correct grammar. Use one or two concise supporting details with correct word choices (e.g., 'basic computer course' → 'a basic computer course'; remove unclear phrase 'high risk studies').
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a child by taking a basic computer course at school. Later, after I finished my university studies and started working in an office, I improved my typing speed through daily practice.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 36.0Sugestão: Answer in full sentences with correct word order and grammar. Be specific about methods and use linking words (for example, 'I do X by Y and Z'). Mention concrete resources and routines rather than vague fragments.
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes each day using online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy. I also watch tutorial videos on YouTube to learn proper finger placement and use typing apps to reinforce my skills.
× I usually prefer typing because I have a quite experience about it and also I have quite bad handwriting.
✓ I usually prefer typing because I have quite a lot of experience with it, and I also have rather bad handwriting.
The original sentence misuses 'quite' with a countable/uncountable noun and wrong preposition. Use 'quite a lot of experience' or 'quite a bit of experience' for uncountable 'experience' and 'with' instead of 'about'. Place 'also' before the verb phrase or after the comma for clarity. 'Rather' is a better adverb for 'bad handwriting' in this context. Grammar problem type ID: 13
× I usually type on a desktop keyboard every day because I find it quite convenient. For instance, I actually work at the office and I have to.
✓ I usually type on a desktop keyboard every day because I find it quite convenient. For instance, I actually work at the office, so I have to.
The original has a sentence fragment 'I have to' lacking an object or connector; using 'so' links the reason and obligation. Also added a comma before 'so' for clarity. The pronoun use was fine but the sentence structure needed correction. Grammar problem type ID: 12
× I learned basic computer course during my childhood, but I expanded it whenever I completed my high risk studies and started to working in the office.
✓ I took a basic computer course during my childhood, and I expanded my skills after I completed my higher studies and started working in the office.
Use 'took' or 'attended' for courses in past tense. 'Learned basic computer course' is ungrammatical. 'Expanded it whenever I completed my high risk studies' is incorrect: 'whenever' and 'high risk studies' are wrong choices. Use 'after' for sequence and 'higher studies' (or 'secondary/higher education') instead of 'high risk studies'. Remove extra 'to' in 'started to working'. Correct verb forms and clearer temporal connectors. Grammar problem type ID: 5
× Improve my typing level by practicing every day and learn about. Your features from YouTube or other social media platforms also I used to.
✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day and learning from tutorials and features on YouTube and other social media platforms, which I also use.
Original sentences lack a subject and have fragmented clauses. Begin with 'I' to include the subject, use parallel gerunds 'practicing' and 'learning'. 'Learn about. Your features' is broken; combine into 'learning from tutorials and features'. Place 'which I also use' at the end to modify platforms. This fixes sentence fragments and word order. Grammar problem type ID: 26