Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
Actually I prefer umm doing handwriting because umm, I think I, I was more like in I, I mean more like enjoying the umm, the writing that umm give me a feeling of a specific umm I.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Uh, yes, I type on the laptop keyboard every day and actually umm, I'm not really familiar with it. I'm more like umm, doing some handwriting because sometimes if I make made a mistake, umm it.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Actually, I learned, I have learned it for a very long time since I because since I was a child, our school trained trained me how to use on the keyboard to type some words.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Umm, maybe I will choose umm to type on the keyboard and in in the WPS because umm, this, this application will help me to umm will help me to umm find some mistake umm.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答要更直接且条理清晰,避免频繁使用停顿词(如 umm、I mean)。先用一句话明确表达观点,然后用一到两句具体理由支持,使用连接词使逻辑连贯。例如说明为什么喜欢手写(触感、记忆更好或更有创意)。控制在最多五句内。
Exemplo: I prefer handwriting. I enjoy the physical feel of writing because it helps me remember information better. Also, writing by hand feels more personal and creative, which I find satisfying.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答需要更完整和语法正确。先直接回答问题(desktop or laptop),然后解释频率和原因,并避免未完成的句子。使用连接词(because, so)给出具体原因,例如不熟练或常犯错。
Exemplo: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day. However, I am not very confident with typing because I often make mistakes, so I prefer handwriting for important notes.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答应更简洁并使用正确时态。先给出时间点(e.g. when I was a child),然后简要说明学习方式(school lessons)和效果。避免重复词和语法错误。
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a child. My school offered lessons that taught us basic typing skills, so I became familiar with the keyboard early on.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: 回答要更具体,说明改善方法的步骤和工具,使用连贯的连接词并减少填充词。可以提到练习频率、使用特定软件或练习方法(如打字练习网站、定期练习),以及如何纠正错误。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on my laptop and using WPS spell-check to find mistakes. I also use online typing exercises for 15 minutes daily to increase my speed and accuracy.
× Actually I prefer umm doing handwriting because umm, I think I, I was more like in I, I mean more like enjoying the umm, the writing that umm give me a feeling of a specific umm I.
✓ Actually I prefer handwriting because I think I used to enjoy writing; it gives me a certain feeling.
问题类型:动词 + -ing 形式以及句子结构混乱。原句中“doing handwriting”不自然,英语通常说“prefer handwriting”或“prefer writing”。此外“the writing that umm give me”中动词“give”应与主语“writing”保持三单形式“gives”。建议简化句子,去掉语气词并使用正确动词形式。
× Uh, yes, I type on the laptop keyboard every day and actually umm, I'm not really familiar with it. I'm more like umm, doing some handwriting because sometimes if I make made a mistake, umm it.
✓ Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day, but I'm not very familiar with it. I prefer handwriting because sometimes if I make a mistake, it is easier to correct.
问题类型:代词与动词时态混用和句子不完整。原句中出现“make made”是时态重复错误;句末“umm it.”不完整,缺少谓语。建议删除重复词,补全句子并使用一致时态。
× Actually, I learned, I have learned it for a very long time since I because since I was a child, our school trained trained me how to use on the keyboard to type some words.
✓ Actually, I learned it a long time ago; since I was a child my school trained me how to use the keyboard to type.
问题类型:过去时使用错误与重复词。原句中混用“learned”与“have learned”且重复“trained trained”。“since I was a child”需要与过去时或现在完成时一致,这里用过去时“learned... a long time ago”更合适。去掉多余介词“on the keyboard”和重复词。
× Umm, maybe I will choose umm to type on the keyboard and in in the WPS because umm, this, this application will help me to umm will help me to umm find some mistake umm.
✓ Maybe I will choose to type on the keyboard using WPS because this application will help me find mistakes.
问题类型:动词 + -ing 形式及句子冗余。原句中“choose to type on the keyboard and in in the WPS”结构混乱,重复“will help me to umm will help me to”。建议使用不定式“choose to type”并去掉重复词,动词短语用“help me find mistakes”更简洁自然。