Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear reason, but avoid repeating the same idea about beautiful views and happiness. Use more natural expressions, such as “look out of the window,” “take photos,” and “post them on social media.” Also, make sure pronouns agree with plural nouns: “views” should be followed by “them,” not “it.” Keep the answer to three or four well-linked sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer sitting by the window because I enjoy looking at the scenery during a journey. The views help me relax, and I often take a few photos of interesting landscapes. If they turn out well, I post them on social media.

Sugestão: The answer responds directly and includes relevant details, such as the journey’s length, summer trips, scenery, and snacks. However, “My hometown from where I live” is unclear; say “My hometown was about a four-hour drive from where we lived.” Avoid repeating “used to,” and complete the final sentence because it currently ends with “so hard.” Use a specific ending, such as “hard to resist,” and connect the details more naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, we often took long journeys when I was a child. My hometown was about a four-hour drive from where we lived, so we visited it every summer. I enjoyed looking at the scenery and eating homemade snacks along the way, which made the journey feel enjoyable rather than tiring.

× The nature makes me the happiest.

✓ Nature makes me happiest.

Nature is an uncountable noun when referring to the natural world in general, so it does not usually take the definite article the. Also, happiest is acceptable without the when it is used after makes me to describe a resulting feeling. For example: Nature makes me happiest.

× I like to take my phone out and click a few pictures and I would like to post it on my Instagram or any socials.

✓ I like to take my phone out and click a few pictures, and I would like to post them on Instagram or on social media.

The pronoun it refers to a few pictures, which is plural. Therefore, the correct pronoun is them. Use it for one thing and them for more than one thing. For example: I took several pictures and posted them online.

× My hometown from where I live is about a four hour drive.

✓ My hometown was about a four-hour drive from where I lived.

The original sentence has an unclear structure because from where I live is placed between my hometown and the verb. The phrase should come after the distance expression. Since the question asks about your childhood, the past forms was and lived fit the time reference. Also, four-hour functions as a compound adjective before drive, so it should be hyphenated.

× The beautiful scenery outside the window used to always amaze me and the yummy snacks I used to eat while on the way is what used to be so hard.

✓ The beautiful scenery outside the window always amazed me, and the yummy snacks I used to eat along the way were also very enjoyable.

The subject snacks is plural, so it must take the plural verb were, not is. The sentence also contains two separate ideas, so separating them with a comma and and makes the structure clearer. When describing repeated experiences in the past, always amazed is a natural past-tense form, and along the way is the standard expression.