Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答直接，给出了原因和例子，结构基本清晰。不过，“scenario”在这里不自然，应改为“scenery”或“view”；“it makes me more flexible when I want to sleep”表达不准确，可以说“it is easier to lean against the window and sleep”。另外，“online trips”与上下文不符，应该是“long journeys”或“train journeys”。建议使用“Also”或“Moreover”连接第二个理由，并确保例子与观点相关。

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I can enjoy the scenery along the way. Also, it is easier to lean against the window and take a short nap. For example, on a long train journey, I love watching the countryside go by.

Sugestão: 你回答了“Yes”，但后面的句子存在明显的语法和表达问题，而且答案没有完整结束。应使用过去时，因为问题询问的是童年经历，例如将“travel”改为“travelled”；“the Mongolia”应改为“Mongolia”；“the trip we travelled to Mongolia”可以改为“a trip to Mongolia”。同时，需要补充具体信息，例如旅行持续多久、和谁一起去、途中做了什么以及你的感受，并用“After that”或“Although”连接细节。答案最好控制在3至4个完整句子内。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was in secondary school, my family and I travelled to Mongolia, and the journey took almost two days. Although it was tiring, I really enjoyed spending time with my family and seeing the beautiful scenery along the way.

× Yes, when it comes to the long journey the trip we traveled to the Mongolia when I was a secondary school student comes to mind.

✓ Yes, when it comes to a long journey, the trip we took to Mongolia when I was a secondary school student comes to mind.

“long journey”在这里是第一次提到的泛指概念，因此应使用不定冠词“a”，而不是定冠词“the”。国家名称“Mongolia”前通常不使用“the”。另外，“the trip we traveled to”结构不正确，应该使用“the trip we took to Mongolia”，表示“我们去蒙古的那次旅行”。

× Yes, when it comes to the long journey the trip we traveled to the Mongolia when I was a secondary school student comes to mind.

✓ Yes, when it comes to a long journey, the trip we took to Mongolia when I was a secondary school student comes to mind.

原句中“the long journey”和“the trip”连续堆叠，句子结构不清楚；“the trip we traveled to”也不能正确表达“去某地的旅行”。可以使用“the trip we took to Mongolia”这一完整、自然的结构。

× It is a pretty long journey that we first travel to

✓ It was a pretty long journey that we first took when I was a secondary school student.

题目询问的是童年时期过去发生的旅行，所以应使用过去时。“is”应改为“was”。原句中的“travel”也应改为过去时，但表达“经历一次旅行”时，使用“took”比“traveled to”更自然。

× It is a pretty long journey that we first travel to

✓ It was a pretty long journey that we first took when I was a secondary school student.

原句以“travel to”结尾，句子没有完整表达意思，而且“journey that we travel to”搭配错误。应使用“a journey that we took”来表示“我们经历的一次旅行”。回答口语题时，要确保每句话都有完整的主语、谓语和完整意思。