Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly using the correct present tense: “I prefer sitting by the window.” Avoid repeating words such as “I,” “around,” and “view.” Use natural expressions like “sit by the window” and “enjoy the scenery,” and finish with one clear reason. You could also add a specific detail about what you like to see during a journey.

Exemplo: Absolutely. I prefer sitting by the window when I travel because I can enjoy the scenery along the way. I especially like watching the countryside and small towns pass by.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear answer, such as “Yes, I did.” Then describe the journey using the past simple: “I went” and “I enjoyed.” Use “my family,” not “my families,” and add a linking word such as “because” or “although” to connect your details. Include a specific detail about the destination, the journey, or how you felt.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I took a long car journey to Sukhna Lake with my family. It took several hours, but I enjoyed watching the scenery and spending time together in such a peaceful place.

× Absolutely, I prefer sit by the window when I was travelling because when I set up in the window side I I was see clearly all view of the all around us around area and.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer sitting by the window when I travel because, from a window seat, I can see the whole view of the surrounding area.

After prefer, use a gerund with the pattern prefer + verb-ing. Therefore, prefer sit should be prefer sitting. This form is natural when expressing a general preference.

× Absolutely, I prefer sit by the window when I was travelling because when I set up in the window side I I was see clearly all view of the all around us around area and.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer sitting by the window when I travel because, from a window seat, I can see the whole view of the surrounding area.

The question asks about a general preference, so use the present tense: when I travel. Use can see, not was see, because can expresses present ability. Avoid combining was directly with the base verb see.

× Absolutely, I prefer sit by the window when I was travelling because when I set up in the window side I I was see clearly all view of the all around us around area and.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer sitting by the window when I travel because, from a window seat, I can see the whole view of the surrounding area.

Window side is not a natural prepositional phrase in this context. Use from a window seat to explain the place from which you can see the scenery.

× Absolutely, I prefer sit by the window when I was travelling because when I set up in the window side I I was see clearly all view of the all around us around area and.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer sitting by the window when I travel because, from a window seat, I can see the whole view of the surrounding area.

The original sentence contains repeated words and incomplete or disorganized phrases, such as I I, all around us around area, and the final and. Organize the sentence into a clear main clause followed by a because clause.

× Yes, I remember when I was I went to went to the Sukhna lake with my families by car. I I was enjoy the scenery of the lake and peaceful environment.

✓ Yes, I remember going to Sukhna Lake with my family by car. I enjoyed the scenery of the lake and its peaceful environment.

Family refers to one family in this sentence, so use the singular form family, not the plural form families. Use plural families only when referring to more than one family.

× Yes, I remember when I was I went to went to the Sukhna lake with my families by car. I I was enjoy the scenery of the lake and peaceful environment.

✓ Yes, I remember going to Sukhna Lake with my family by car. I enjoyed the scenery of the lake and its peaceful environment.

The journey happened in the past, so use the simple past enjoyed. The form was enjoy is incorrect because was cannot be followed directly by the base verb enjoy. The repeated forms was I went and went to went to should also be reduced to a single past-time expression.

× Yes, I remember when I was I went to went to the Sukhna lake with my families by car. I I was enjoy the scenery of the lake and peaceful environment.

✓ Yes, I remember going to Sukhna Lake with my family by car. I enjoyed the scenery of the lake and its peaceful environment.

After remember, use a gerund when referring to a past experience: remember going. This is more concise and avoids the unnecessary repetition in remember when I was I went to went to.

× Yes, I remember when I was I went to went to the Sukhna lake with my families by car. I I was enjoy the scenery of the lake and peaceful environment.

✓ Yes, I remember going to Sukhna Lake with my family by car. I enjoyed the scenery of the lake and its peaceful environment.

The phrase peaceful environment needs a determiner. In the correction, its identifies the environment belonging to or associated with the lake, making the noun phrase complete.

× Yes, I remember when I was I went to went to the Sukhna lake with my families by car. I I was enjoy the scenery of the lake and peaceful environment.

✓ Yes, I remember going to Sukhna Lake with my family by car. I enjoyed the scenery of the lake and its peaceful environment.

The original answer has repeated subjects and verbs, including I I and went to went to. Use one clear verb phrase in each clause, and connect the ideas in a simple, well-structured way.