Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 「Yes, I also do like」は不自然なので「Yes, I do」または「Yes, I prefer…」を使いましょう。「sitting window seat」は「sitting in a window seat」、「scenarily」は「the scenery」、「all moment I couldn't forget」は「memories I will never forget」のように修正できます。回答は、最初に好みを明確に述べ、その後に理由と具体例を加えると効果的です。また、「because」が重複しているため、「so」や「In addition」を使って文をつなげ、2〜3文に整理しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer sitting in a window seat when I travel. I enjoy looking at the scenery, and I can also take photos of memorable places along the way. It makes the journey more enjoyable and gives me memories to look back on.

Sugestão: 質問にはまず「Yes, I did.」と直接答えましょう。「for example」の前後に句読点を入れ、「we went to monthfusi」は正確な地名または「a mountain called…」にしてください。「climb to top」は「climb to the top」、「buddy taking」は文脈上「breathtaking」、「couldn't forget」は「I will never forget」に修正できます。旅行の場所、目的、印象に残った理由を順序立てて説明し、「Then」だけでなく「because」や「As a result」などの linking words を使うと、より自然で具体的になります。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my family and I took a long trip to Mount Fusi, where we climbed to the top of the mountain. The view was breathtaking, so it became a family memory that I will never forget.

× Yes, I also do like sitting window seat because I can enjoy scenarily during the trip and also I can take a picture to capture the memalama moment because I like to preserve all moment I couldn't forget.

✓ Yes, I also like sitting in a window seat because I can enjoy the scenery during the trip and take a picture to capture the memorable moment because I like to preserve every moment I cannot forget.

The preposition in is needed before a seat when describing where someone sits. Use sit in a seat, not sit a seat. A more natural expression is enjoy the scenery, rather than enjoy scenarily.

× Yes, I also do like sitting window seat because I can enjoy scenarily during the trip and also I can take a picture to capture the memalama moment because I like to preserve all moment I couldn't forget.

✓ Yes, I also like sitting in a window seat because I can enjoy the scenery during the trip and take a picture to capture the memorable moment because I like to preserve every moment I cannot forget.

The singular countable noun seat needs an article. Use a window seat because the speaker is referring to one seat, not a specific seat already mentioned.

× Yes, I also do like sitting window seat because I can enjoy scenarily during the trip and also I can take a picture to capture the memalama moment because I like to preserve all moment I couldn't forget.

✓ Yes, I also like sitting in a window seat because I can enjoy the scenery during the trip and take a picture to capture the memorable moment because I like to preserve every moment I cannot forget.

Scenarily is not the correct word in this context. Scenery is the noun for natural views. Also, memorable is the adjective that describes a moment worth remembering.

× Yes, I also do like sitting window seat because I can enjoy scenarily during the trip and also I can take a picture to capture the memalama moment because I like to preserve all moment I couldn't forget.

✓ Yes, I also like sitting in a window seat because I can enjoy the scenery during the trip and take a picture to capture the memorable moment because I like to preserve all the moments I cannot forget.

The plural noun moments is needed after all because the speaker is referring to multiple moments. You can also use every moment with a singular noun.

× Of course I had a long journey with my family as a kid for example we went to monthfusi to climb to top of the mountain, then the view was buddy taking and couldn't forget.

✓ Of course, I had a long journey with my family as a child. For example, we went to Monthfusi to climb to the top of the mountain. The view was breathtaking, and I could not forget it.

The definite article the is required before top because the phrase is the top of the mountain. Use the top when referring to a specific part of a particular mountain.

× Of course I had a long journey with my family as a kid for example we went to monthfusi to climb to top of the mountain, then the view was buddy taking and couldn't forget.

✓ Of course, I had a long journey with my family as a child. For example, we went to Monthfusi to climb to the top of the mountain. The view was breathtaking, and I could not forget it.

Buddy taking is not a correct adjective. Breathtaking is the appropriate adjective for a view that is extremely beautiful or impressive.

× Of course I had a long journey with my family as a kid for example we went to monthfusi to climb to top of the mountain, then the view was buddy taking and couldn't forget.

✓ Of course, I had a long journey with my family as a child. For example, we went to Monthfusi to climb to the top of the mountain. The view was breathtaking, and I could not forget it.

The original response joins several complete ideas without clear sentence boundaries. Separating the ideas into sentences makes the structure clearer. The subject I should also be stated before could not forget, and it refers back to the view.