Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common word choice and grammar (e.g. 'Amman', 'window seat', 'scenic'). Avoid redundancy (mentioning both landing and takeoff is fine but phrase more smoothly).

Exemplo: Yes, I usually prefer the window seat when I travel. For example, on a recent flight to Amman I booked a window seat and enjoyed watching the takeoff and landing as well as the cloud formations and sunlight; the view was very scenic and helped me feel less motion sick.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid confusing tense shifts. Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the past experience question, then briefly contrast with a recent experience using linking words. Use correct phrasing ('as a child', 'recently', 'scenery', 'fellow passengers'). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have any long family trips when I was a child. However, recently I took a long journey with my own child, who was excited to sit by the window and enjoy the scenery while chatting with other passengers.

× Yes, recently we traveled to Amaman.

✓ Yes, recently we traveled to Amman.

The sentence uses past simple correctly for a completed action, but the place name is misspelled (Amman). This is a spelling issue rather than grammar; correct spelling ensures clear reference. Suggestion: verify proper nouns for correct spelling.

× During the travel I selected a window state on my flight.

✓ During the trip I selected a window seat on my flight.

Incorrect word choice: 'travel' should be 'trip' or 'the journey' and 'window state' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'window seat'. Use 'the trip' or 'during the trip' for a specific journey. Suggestion: use 'trip' for countable events and 'seat' for places on a plane.

× So in this seat I was able to view the landing of the flight and the takeoff flight and also the cloudy environment and the rays of the sun, it was a lovely scenatic view which helped me to calm myself from motion sickness.

✓ From this seat I was able to see the landing and takeoff, as well as the cloudy sky and rays of the sun. It was a lovely scenic view that helped calm my motion sickness.

Run-on sentence and word choice issues: 'view the landing of the flight and the takeoff flight' is awkward; use 'see the landing and takeoff'. 'Cloudy environment' -> 'cloudy sky'; 'scenatic' -> 'scenic'. 'Helped me to calm myself from motion sickness' is unidiomatic; use 'helped calm my motion sickness'. Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: prefer concise verb phrases and natural collocations (see, landing/takeoff, cloudy sky, scenic, calm my motion sickness).

× No, long journey with my family as a child has never happened, but I had a very good experience on the recent times where I took my child for a very long journey.

✓ No, I never had a long journey with my family as a child, but I had a very good experience recently when I took my child on a long journey.

Tense and word order: 'has never happened' is grammatically possible but awkward here; prefer 'I never had' for past life experience. 'On the recent times' is incorrect; use 'recently' or 'in recent times'. 'Where I took my child for a very long journey' should be 'when I took my child on a long journey'. Suggestion: use natural past tense phrasing for past experiences and correct prepositional phrases ('on a journey' not 'for a journey').

× So during that time my child was so excited to jump into the window seat and see the sceneries and interact with the fellow people who traveled on the flight.

✓ During that time my child was excited to climb into the window seat, see the scenery, and interact with the fellow passengers on the flight.

Verb form and word choice: 'was so excited to jump into' is informal and 'jump into the window seat' is odd; 'climb into' or 'get into' is better. 'See the sceneries' is incorrect plural; 'scenery' is uncountable. 'Fellow people who traveled on the flight' is unnatural; use 'fellow passengers'. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs for boarding/moving to a seat, use uncountable 'scenery', and 'passengers' for people on a flight.