Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and natural, but it is a bit long-winded and contains a small grammar issue. Make a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "really satisfying" and "enjoy the sceneries" overlap). Correct the grammar: say "ask the passenger sitting next to you to move" or "ask the person beside you to let you pass."

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer a window seat because I enjoy the changing scenery during a journey. For example, on road trips I like watching mountains and villages pass by, which helps me relax. However, it can be inconvenient when I need to use the restroom, because I have to ask the person beside me to move.

Sugestão: The answer is clear and gives a specific example, which is good. Improve tense accuracy and expand slightly with one linking phrase to explain why it was memorable. Keep it concise and avoid repeating generic adjectives like "really unforgettable"—use one strong descriptor and give a concrete detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I went on a long trip to Poland and Germany when I was in junior high school. It was unforgettable because it was my first time flying and I remember seeing historic architecture in Kraków, which left a strong impression on me.

× Yes, because I get to enjoy the sceneries along the way and it is always really satisfying to sit beside a window, but it can be quite convenient sometimes because when you want to go to a bathroom, you need to ask the passengers sit by to stay.

✓ Yes, because I get to enjoy the scenery along the way and it is always really satisfying to sit beside a window, but it can sometimes be inconvenient because when you want to go to the bathroom, you need to ask the passenger sitting beside you to move.

Errors: 'sceneries' is incorrect — 'scenery' is an uncountable noun (ID 1). 'a bathroom' should be 'the bathroom' because a specific facility on a vehicle is meant (ID 17 / 22). 'passengers sit by' is ungrammatical word order and plurality: use singular 'passenger sitting beside you' or 'the passenger sitting next to you' (IDs 26 and 12). 'it can be quite convenient sometimes' conflicts with context; meaning is likely 'inconvenient' so corrected for coherence. Suggestions: use uncountable nouns for general views ('scenery'), use the definite article for specific locations ('the bathroom'), use correct noun phrase order with participle ('passenger sitting beside you'), and choose adjective matching intended meaning ('inconvenient' if you mean troublesome).

× Yes, I have travelled to Poland and Germany when I was in junior high school.

✓ Yes, I travelled to Poland and Germany when I was in junior high school.

Error: mixing present perfect ('have travelled') with a specific past time expression ('when I was in junior high school') is incorrect (ID 5). Use simple past ('travelled') for completed actions at a definite time in the past. Suggestion: use present perfect only for unspecified past experiences or when time is not given; use simple past with a time reference.

× It was a really unforgettable memory because that was the first time that I took a flight.

✓ It was a really unforgettable experience because that was the first time I had taken a flight.

Errors: 'memory' is less natural than 'experience' in this context (ID 13) and tense sequence issue: when referring to an earlier event relative to another past moment ('the first time' vs 'it was'), use past perfect ('had taken') (ID 5/26). Also 'that' after 'time' is optional; natural phrasing is 'the first time I had taken a flight.' Suggestion: use past perfect to show the action occurred before the past reference point and prefer 'experience' for events remembered.