Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 总体表现自然且能直接回答问题，但存在填充词（如“uh”）较多、句子略显冗长以及少量表达不够地道（如“My seat L or A”）。建议： 1) 减少填充词：答题前短暂停顿替代“uh”； 2) 句子简洁：把观点放在首句，后面用一到两句具体说明； 3) 用更地道的表达表示座位（例如 “window seat on a plane” 或具体座位号如 “seat A or L” 取决于机型）。 练习时可反复练习两到三句话的模板回答，并刻意把停顿和连接词练熟。

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling. I enjoy looking at the scenery, especially during flights when I can watch sunrises or sunsets. For that reason, I always try to book a window seat on the plane.

Sugestão: 回答包含个人经历和细节，这是优点。但存在时态与语法混用（如“have been”与“when I was 10”冲突）、重复和填充词较多、描述不够准确（如“Jelly blue”应为“gorgeous turquoise/clear blue sea”），以及句子结构混乱。建议： 1) 注意时态一致：描述过去经历用过去式； 2) 去掉多余重复与填充词，保持每题不超过5句； 3) 使用准确的描述性词汇并给出具体细节（比如行程长度、活动细节、感受）。 可写出一到两句支撑细节，使用连接词如 “for example” 或 “during the trip”。

Exemplo: Yes, when I was 10 my parents took me to the Maldives for a ten-day family holiday. The water was a beautiful turquoise colour, and we often went fishing together — I even caught three small fish, which made me feel proud.

× Yes, I love to sit by the window when traveling.

✓ Yes, I love sitting by the window when traveling.

原句用法並非錯誤，但在英語中當表達喜好時，常用動名詞（sit → sitting）更自然："love sitting"。建議使用動名詞以符合慣用語法。

× I think when you said uh, by the window, you can see all the views around the trip and especially when you travel by plane, you can see the sun or even the sunset or the sunrise.

✓ I think when you sit by the window, you can see all the views during the trip, and especially when you travel by plane, you can see the sun, the sunset, or the sunrise.

原句中混用了時態和代詞（"you said" 不合適），且片語搭配不自然。依據語境應用一般現在時描述普遍事實（"when you sit"），並用介詞短語 "during the trip" 表示旅程期間。建議簡化並使用一致時態來表達普遍真理。

× So I will always choose the L seat or the A seat at the plane.

✓ So I will always choose seat L or seat A on the plane.

原句中冠詞和介詞使用不當。英文中說座位通常用 "seat L/seat A" 並且搭交通工具用介詞 "on"（搭乘飛機用 on the plane），而不是 "at the plane"。此外不需要在 seat 前加不定冠詞。

× Yes, I have been to Maldives with my parents when I was 10 years old and it is a, it was a trip for like 10 days.

✓ Yes, I went to the Maldives with my parents when I was 10 years old; it was a trip of about ten days.

此處描述過去發生的具體事件，應使用一般過去時（went），而非現在完成式（have been），並補上定冠詞 "the Maldives"。"like 10 days" 在正式語域中應改為 "about ten days"。

× Uh, we, we have watched the beautiful Jelly blue, uh, blue sea and we fishing together and I have 3 fishes.

✓ We saw the beautiful jelly-blue sea and went fishing together, and I caught three fish.

多處錯誤： - "have watched" 與語境不符，描述過去經歷應用過去時（saw）。 - "Jelly blue" 不自然，改為複合形容詞 "jelly-blue" 或直接用 "beautiful blue sea"。 - "we fishing together" 缺少動詞，應為 "we went fishing together"。 - "I have 3 fishes" 不正確：魚作為不可數或複數時用 "fish"（複數為 fish），且此為過去發生應用過去式 "I caught three fish"。建議使用一致的過去時並修正名詞複數形式與動詞。