Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?
Candidato
No I don't I prefer to be close to nature because it makes my mind it makes my mind clean and it can broaden it it can broaden my sight.
Examinador
Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?
Candidato
Yes, I did. I also remember I remember my Japan my journey to Japan with my parents I can
Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 回答应更直接并控制句子长度,同时避免重复和语法错误。建议先给出明确的主题句(I prefer not to sit by the window),然后用一到两句具体理由支持。注意用连词(because / and / so)连接句子,并用更自然的表达替换“makes my mind clean”和“broaden my sight”。例如可说“refreshes my mind”或“gives me a wider view”。
Exemplo: I don’t usually sit by the window when I travel. I prefer to be near the aisle because I like stretching my legs and moving around. However, I enjoy looking at natural scenery because it refreshes my mind and gives me a broader view of the place.
Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: 回答要完整并展开细节。避免重复(例如“I remember I remember”),并补充具体信息:什么时候去、旅行持续多久、最难忘的经历或感受。使用连词(for example, because, and)使句子更连贯。控制在最多五句内。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. For example, when I was ten my parents and I took a long trip to Japan that lasted two weeks. I remember visiting temples and trying new foods, which was exciting and a bit challenging because I didn’t speak the language. That trip left me with many fond memories of exploring different cities together.
× No I don't I prefer to be close to nature because it makes my mind it makes my mind clean and it can broaden it it can broaden my sight.
✓ No, I don't. I prefer to be close to nature because it clears my mind and can broaden my outlook.
问题类型为动名词或动词形式的问题(Verb + -ing form)。原句中“it makes my mind clean”用法不自然且重复“it makes my mind”和“it can broaden it it can broaden my sight”有重复与表达不当。应使用常见搭配“clear my mind”(清除/使头脑清醒)而不是“make my mind clean”,且将“broaden my sight”改为更地道的“broaden my outlook”或“broaden my horizons”。此外需要加标点并去掉重复短语。建议:记住常用搭配(如 clear my mind / broaden my horizons/outlook),避免逐字翻译并删除重复。
× Yes, I did. I also remember I remember my Japan my journey to Japan with my parents I can
✓ Yes, I did. I also remember my journey to Japan with my parents.
问题类型为过去时态问题(Past tense issue)。原句中有重复“I also remember I remember”且出现未完成的句子结尾“I can”,导致句子不完整。面试问题是过去经历,应使用过去时或现在完成表示记忆(此处用一般现在时的 remember 也可,但句子结构必须完整)。建议删除重复部分并移除不完整的“I can”,或继续补充完整的内容(例如“I can still remember it vividly.”)。此外注意标点以分隔句子。