Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix verb forms and prepositions (e.g., “sit by the window,” “sit in the aisle”). Avoid redundancy and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually prefer to sit by the window, especially when I want to enjoy the view or have a meal. However, when I travel by plane or long-distance train I often choose an aisle seat because it’s easier to get up and move around. Overall, it depends on whether I want the view or convenience.

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically correct and more specific. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then explain with clear reasons and one concrete detail (when, where, how it felt). Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct vocabulary (e.g., “high-speed trains,” “slow”). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child my family often took long train journeys because there were no high-speed trains, so trips took many hours. For example, we sometimes had to get up very early and the slow journey felt tiring but also gave us time to talk and play games together.

× For example, if I eat dinner or drink coffee, I prefer sit by the window, but when I take a plane or take a train, I prefer situ close to Isle because it's easy to go to

✓ For example, if I eat dinner or drink coffee, I prefer sitting by the window, but when I take a plane or a train, I prefer sitting close to the aisle because it's easy to get to it.

The verb 'prefer' is normally followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) when stating a preference for an action, so 'prefer sit' should be 'prefer sitting'. Also 'take a train' is correct but 'a plane or a train' needs the article 'a' before 'train'. 'situ close to Isle' contains spelling and word choice errors: 'situ' should be 'sitting', 'Isle' (island) is incorrect here; the intended word is 'aisle' (the corridor on a plane/train). Finally, 'easy to go to' is unnatural; use 'easy to get to it' or better 'easy to get to my seat' depending on meaning. Suggestions: use gerund after 'prefer', include appropriate articles, and check vocabulary ('aisle' not 'Isle').

× Yes, I had a long journey with my family when I was child, because when I was child there were no high speed trims so we had to get up early and took the train and the train is very slowly.

✓ Yes, I had a long journey with my family when I was a child, because when I was a child there were no high-speed trains so we had to get up early and take the train, and the train was very slow.

Several past-tense and related errors: 'when I was child' needs the article 'a' -> 'when I was a child'. 'high speed trims' is incorrect spelling and word choice; correct is 'high-speed trains'. After 'we had to' use the base verb form 'take', not past 'took' -> 'had to take'. 'the train is very slowly' mixes present tense and adverb form; to describe past state use past adjective 'was very slow' (adjective slow, not adverb slowly). Suggestions: add missing articles, use correct nouns and hyphenation ('high-speed trains'), after 'had to' follow with base verb, and keep consistent past tense throughout the sentence.