Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答自然但不完整，句子有重复和小语法错误，且在第二句话未完成。建议： 1) 开头直接回应并给出简短原因（主题句）。 2) 使用连接词（for example, because, which）让细节更连贯。 3) 避免重复表达（如“from out from the window”），注意介词用法和时态一致。 4) 保持答案不超过5句，结尾加一句总结或感受。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually prefer the window seat because I enjoy watching the scenery. For example, on flights I like to see cloud formations and sometimes birds, which helps me relax. Also, on trains I can watch changing landscapes, so the journey feels more interesting.

Sugestão: 回答内容明确但有未完成的句子和重复，缺乏具体细节。建议： 1) 开头点明事实后，用一两句具体描述（地点、时间、感觉、具体经历）来丰富内容。 2) 使用连接词（for example, because, so）使句子连贯。 3) 修正语法错误和不完整句（如“the snow was and it was”应补全）。 4) 可以加入结果或感受作为结尾，控制在5句内。

Exemplo: Yes, when I was six my family took a long trip to Beijing. It was winter and extremely cold, and I remember seeing snow for the first time. I was amazed by how everything looked white and quiet, which made the trip very memorable. Since then I have liked winter holidays.

× I always look from out from the window and see the landscape.

✓ I always look out of the window and see the landscape.

句中使用短语不正确，重复使用介词并且短语顺序错误。应使用固定搭配 “look out of (the window)” 或更常见的 “look out the window”。建议记住常用短语搭配，避免重复介词。

× When I am on plane, I can see the birds flying through the clouds which can relax me and

✓ When I am on a plane, I can see birds flying through the clouds, which relaxes me.

缺少不定冠词“a”，短语“on a plane”为固定搭配；从句中关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句要用逗号，并且主句与从句的主谓一致，使用单数动词“relaxes”。此外原句结尾不完整，需补全为完整句子。建议注意冠词使用和主谓一致。

× Did you have a long journey with your family as a child? / Yes, when I was six years old I had a long journey with my family and we went to Beijing.

✓ Yes, when I was six years old I went on a long journey with my family to Beijing.

动词搭配不当，常用表达为 “go on a journey” 而不是 “have a journey”。合并从句使表达更自然。建议记忆常见动词与名词的固定搭配（collocations）。

× In winter it was very cold and the snow was and it was my first time to see the snow.

✓ In winter it was very cold and it was my first time seeing the snow.

原句中“the snow was and”结构不完整且重复“the snow”。另外“my first time to see the snow”常用更自然的“my first time seeing the snow”或“the first time I had seen snow”。建议使用完整句并选用更地道的非谓语结构。