Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve clarity, grammar and completeness. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g. "I prefer window seats"), avoid repetition, and finish the thought. Add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g. "because", "for example"). Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I can enjoy the scenery outside. For example, when I fly I like watching the changing landscapes and the colours of the sky, which helps me relax. Also, having a window seat feels more private and comfortable.

Sugestão: Clarify tense and meaning, and use natural phrasing. Begin with a direct answer, then add one or two specific details about the trip (where, when, what made it memorable) using linking words (e.g. "but", "because", "for example"). Avoid unclear phrases like "I am a family put together." Keep answers concise and coherent (2–4 sentences).

Exemplo: No, I didn't have any long journeys as a child, but I did go on a short trip with my family to the countryside when I was eight. It was memorable because we hiked together and had a picnic by a lake, which brought our family closer. I still remember how relaxed and happy everyone felt that day.

× Definitely I like to window seat because window seat can see more scenery when I'm flying and the sky was beautiful. Window seats also takes

✓ I definitely like the window seat because you can see more scenery when I'm flying, and the sky is beautiful. Window seats also take

Multiple issues: adverb placement and article use plus subject-verb agreement. 'Definitely' is better after 'I' as 'I definitely like'. 'window seat' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific seat type. 'window seat can see' is incorrect because a seat cannot 'see'—use an impersonal 'you can see' or 'you can see more scenery'. Tense consistency: use present tense 'is' to match 'I definitely like' and present habitual 'when I'm flying'. 'Window seats also takes' has a subject-verb agreement error: plural 'Window seats' requires 'take'. Suggestions: place adverbs close to the verb, use 'the' for specific nouns, use 'you' for general statements about what can be seen, and ensure subject and verb agree in number.

× Did you have a long journey with your family as a child? Student: No I haven't. However, I had a short journey when I was a child with my family. This is an impressive experience. I am a family put together and feel well.

✓ No, I haven't. However, I went on a short journey with my family when I was a child. It was an impressive experience. My family was close and I felt happy.

Errors: tense and sentence structure. The question asks about past experiences, so 'I had a short journey' is acceptable but 'went on a short journey' is more natural. 'This is an impressive experience' mixes present with past; it should be past: 'It was an impressive experience.' 'I am a family put together and feel well' is ungrammatical: likely intended 'My family was close and I felt well/was happy.' Use past tense for past events and rephrase to express family closeness. Suggestions: Use 'went on' for trips, maintain past tense consistently, and use natural collocations like 'my family was close' or 'we were a close family.'