Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with tense and grammar, keep the answer concise (max 5 sentences), and include a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "I don't" or "I didn't used to") and plural/singular forms ("window", "windows"). Add linking words like "because" or "so" appropriately and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: I don't prefer to sit by the window when I travel. I find window seats inconvenient because it's harder to get up to use the toilet, and it's awkward to ask other passengers to move. For longer trips, I choose an aisle seat so I can get up freely.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence and then give specific supporting details. Use correct vocabulary and spelling ("skyscrapers", "not" instead of "nor"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas. Be more specific about what made the trip memorable (places, feelings, or activities).

Exemplo: Yes, I took a long trip to Shanghai with my family when I was a child, and it remains very memorable. For example, I was amazed by the tall skyscrapers and the busy city streets, and we visited the Bund where I saw historic buildings and the river view. That trip stood out because it was my first time seeing such a large city.

× No, nowadays I didn't liked to sit by the windows not only when I travel by plane but also by railway, because I feel it's so inconvenient to go to the toilet and ask help for.

✓ No, nowadays I don't like to sit by the window, not only when I travel by plane but also by train, because I find it inconvenient to go to the toilet or ask for help.

Multiple tense and usage errors: 1) 'didn't liked' is incorrect past form; with 'nowadays' (present time) use present tense 'don't like' (Past tense issue). 2) 'windows' should be singular 'window' when referring to the seat by the window (Singular and plural issue). 3) 'travel by railway' is unnatural; use 'travel by train' (word choice, treated as preposition/word use but allowed under provided list as Present tense issue and small wording). 4) 'because I feel it's so inconvenient to go to the toilet and ask help for' has awkward structure: 'find it inconvenient' and 'ask for help' with 'or' to join actions. Suggestion: use present simple for current habits, use 'window' singular, 'train' for rail travel, and rephrase the final clause to 'find it inconvenient to go to the toilet or ask for help.'

× Yes, I traveled to Shanghai when I was a child with my family and that is a memorable journey because I saw many sky creepers and nor enormous landmark in the mega city.

✓ Yes, I traveled to Shanghai with my family when I was a child, and that was a memorable journey because I saw many skyscrapers and several enormous landmarks in the mega city.

Tense and word choice issues: 1) 'that is a memorable journey' should match past time frame 'was a memorable journey' because the trip happened in the past (Past tense issue). 2) 'sky creepers' is incorrect; correct word is 'skyscrapers' (vocabulary). 3) 'nor enormous landmark' is ungrammatical; use 'several enormous landmarks' or 'many enormous landmarks' (Incorrect conjunction/structure and singular/plural). 4) Word order: 'traveled to Shanghai when I was a child with my family' is awkward; better: 'traveled to Shanghai with my family when I was a child.' Suggestions: keep past tense consistently for past events, use correct nouns 'skyscrapers' and plural 'landmarks,' and place time expressions after the verb phrase for clarity.