Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and short unclear phrases. Also correct grammar (e.g., “when I go on trips,” “sitting by the window, I feel,” “easier”). Aim for 2–4 well-formed sentences, use one linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”), and include a brief specific example or effect.

Exemplo: I prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy the view and it helps me relax. For example, on a recent family trip I spent hours watching the countryside pass by while listening to music, which made the journey feel calmer and more private.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence, then add specific details and a linking word to make your answer more vivid. Correct grammar (e.g., “when I was a child,” “we went on a trip to the beach”). Avoid repeating general phrases like “really” twice; instead describe one memorable detail or feeling. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often had long journeys with my family when I was a child. For instance, we once drove overnight to a seaside town, and I remember building sandcastles on the beach at dawn, which made the trip especially memorable and fun.

× I enjoy sitting by the window, especially when I go to trips with my family.

✓ I enjoy sitting by the window, especially when I go on trips with my family.

The error involves the use of the noun 'trips' with the preposition 'to'. The correct collocation is 'go on trips' not 'go to trips'. Also maintain plural 'trips' if referring to multiple outings. Suggestion: use 'go on trips' for general plural trips or 'go on a trip' for a single trip.

× Sitting by window I feel more comfortable and private and I love romanticizing the trips while listening to my favorite songs.

✓ Sitting by the window I feel more comfortable and more private, and I love romanticizing the trips while listening to my favorite songs.

Missing article before 'window' and slight parallelism issue. Use 'the window' and add 'more' before 'private' to parallel 'more comfortable'. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: include definite article and keep parallel adjective structure.

× And it is more easy to do.

✓ And it is easier to do.

Comparative form 'more easy' is nonstandard; the correct comparative of 'easy' is 'easier'. Suggestion: replace 'more easy' with 'easier'.

× It's by window.

✓ It's by the window.

Missing definite article before 'window' and unnatural phrasing. Use 'by the window' to indicate location. Suggestion: include 'the' and consider combining with previous sentence for fluency.

× Yes, we used to go to different trips and holidays with my family when I was child.

✓ Yes, we used to go on different trips and holidays with my family when I was a child.

Two issues: wrong preposition 'go to trips' should be 'go on trips', and missing article before 'child' -> 'a child'. Also maintain past habitual 'used to' which is correct. Suggestion: use 'go on trips' and include 'a' before 'child'.

× I remember that we went to a beach with my family.

✓ I remember that we went to the beach with my family.

When referring to a specific or typical beach outing in past narrative, English commonly uses the definite article 'the beach' rather than 'a beach'. If the intention was any beach, 'to a beach' could be used, but context suggests a particular trip, so 'the beach' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'the beach' for a known or specific beach visit.

× That was really fun and I really enjoyed the time that I spent with my family.

✓ That was really fun, and I really enjoyed the time I spent with my family.

Sentence is mostly correct tense-wise, but wording is slightly redundant ('the time that I spent' -> 'the time I spent') and a comma improves readability. Suggestion: remove unnecessary 'that' for more natural phrasing.