Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: You should give a clear direct answer first (e.g., Yes or No), then add one or two coherent supporting details. Keep sentences short and grammatical, avoid irrelevant words, and use linking words (for example, because, so, or therefore) to connect ideas. Be specific about what you enjoy seeing and when you prefer the window seat (plane, car, train).

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel. I like looking at the natural scenery because it helps me relax and I don't get bored. For example, on trains I enjoy watching the countryside pass by, and on planes I like spotting rivers and mountains from above.

Sugestão: Start with a direct yes/no and then give specific, coherent supporting details using linking words (for example, such as, for instance, because). Mention one or two memorable trips and why they stand out (activities, places, feelings). Keep responses within 3–4 well-formed sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had several long journeys with my family as a child. For instance, we once travelled to another country where we visited historical sites and tried local food, which I still remember vividly. I also took long trips to distant states in India, and those road trips were memorable because we spent hours talking and playing games together.

× Will start to answer tells me to take on natural scenery all sites and it's also quite refreshed racing as I usually don't get bored.

✓ I'll start by saying that I like to take in natural scenery because it refreshes me and I usually don't get bored.

The original sentence fragments and mixes clauses without clear subjects or verbs, causing sentence structure errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 'Will start to answer tells me to take on' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use a clear subject and verb: 'I'll start by saying that...' Connect ideas with 'because' and use correct verb forms ('refreshes me', 'don't get bored'). Suggestion: plan the sentence before speaking, use simple clauses joined by conjunctions, and ensure every clause has a clear subject and verb. Grammar problem type ID:26

× If I'm sitting at the Windows 8 then I used before to set up Windows 8 only if I'm driving outside of my settling by aircraft or vehicle.

✓ If I'm sitting by the window, I prefer it when I'm travelling by aircraft or vehicle.

This sentence contains article misuse and unclear noun phrases (Grammar Problem Type ID 22 and 1). 'Windows 8' is incorrect here and 'sitting at the Windows' should be 'sitting by the window' (singular). 'I used before to set up' is ungrammatical — use a simple present preference: 'I prefer it when I'm travelling by aircraft or vehicle.' Suggestion: use correct article 'the' or none as required ('by the window'), avoid extraneous words, and express habits with 'I prefer' or 'I usually'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Yes, I'm just have several long journeys as a child with my family.

✓ Yes, I had several long journeys with my family as a child.

The sentence mixes present auxiliary 'I'm' with 'have' causing tense errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). For past events 'as a child' use past simple: 'I had.' Also 'several long journeys as a child with my family' should place 'as a child' after the verb or at end for clarity. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past experiences and avoid combining present continuous with simple past verbs. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Many of them roll to other countries and some far away states in India.

✓ Many of them were to other countries and some to distant states in India.

The verb 'roll to' is incorrect for travel destinations; use 'were to' or 'went to' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26 and 11). Also 'far away states' is informal; 'distant states' is better. Use past tense 'were' or 'went' for past journeys. Suggestion: choose verbs appropriate for movement ('went to', 'traveled to') and place prepositions correctly ('to other countries', 'to distant states in India'). Grammar problem type ID:11

× I have some vivid memories of those journeys that I can still recall.

✓ I have vivid memories of those journeys that I can still recall.

This sentence is mostly acceptable but 'I have some vivid memories' is wordy; removing 'some' improves clarity (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Tense and structure are correct: present perfect is appropriate for lasting memories. Suggestion: prefer concise phrasing: 'I have vivid memories...' If focusing on ability to recall, 'I can still recall those journeys' is also fine. Grammar problem type ID:26