Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and communicates your main idea, but it is somewhat repetitive and wordy. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition (e.g., "trees" and "scenery" twice), and use one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Also correct small grammar issues ("the nature" → "nature"; avoid filler like "you know").

Exemplo: I do. I often look out of the car window because the changing landscape relaxes me. For example, I like to watch forests and mountains as they help me unwind after a busy day, and I find the view makes the journey more pleasant.

Sugestão: The answer addresses the question but has grammar errors and unclear phrasing. Improve by giving a concise topic sentence, a clear reason, and a brief conditional example. Remove fillers and fix tense/word order (e.g., "I get dizzy" is fine, but say "I don't take photos"; "it isn't worth it" instead of "it doesn't worth to take").

Exemplo: No, I normally don't take photos from a moving car because I get dizzy when I use my phone. Besides, photos taken through a moving window often turn out blurry, so it isn't worth the effort.

Sugestão: Your answer expresses preference but is vague about what "this" refers to and uses fillers. Improve by clearly stating your choice in the first sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because" and "also"). Correct phrasing ("more calm" → "calmer"; "I find it a bit exciting").

Exemplo: I prefer the sea. I enjoy the colour and the sound of the waves because they make me feel calmer, and I also find the sea a bit mysterious and exciting, which makes visiting it really enjoyable.

× Yes, I often watch the scenery from the window when I travel by car.

✓ Yes, I often look at the scenery through the window when I travel by car.

The verb 'watch' is used for attentive viewing of actions or events (e.g., watch TV). For scenery, native speakers typically use 'look at' or 'look out at' and the preposition 'through' or 'from' the window. Use 'look at the scenery through the window' to sound natural. Suggestion: replace 'watch' with 'look at' and use 'through the window' for natural phrasing.

× I really enjoy watching trees, for example trees or mountains, because it helps me to feel more relaxed and you know that it makes the journey more pleasant and I can also appreciate the natures and scenery.

✓ I really enjoy looking at trees or mountains because it helps me feel more relaxed; it makes the journey more pleasant and I can also appreciate nature and the scenery.

Problems: 'watching' is less natural than 'looking at' for scenery; repeated 'trees, for example trees' is redundant; 'helps me to feel' can be 'helps me feel'; 'you know that it makes' is informal and awkward in this context; 'the natures' is incorrect plural of 'nature' and unnecessary with 'scenery'. Suggestion: use 'look at', remove redundancy, use 'nature' (uncountable), and join ideas with appropriate punctuation.

× No, you know if I work with my cell phone I get dizzy and I don't take photo.

✓ No, if I use my cell phone I get dizzy, so I don't take photos.

Problems: 'work with my cell phone' is unnatural — use 'use my cell phone'; missing plural 'photos'; 'you know' is filler and can be removed; sentence needs a logical connector like 'so'. Suggestion: use 'use' for devices, pluralize 'photo' to 'photos', and link clauses with 'so'.

× If I didn't have this problem the the pictures got them from the window and the car will be so blurry and it doesn't worth to take.

✓ If I didn't have this problem, I would take pictures from the window, but they would be so blurry that it wouldn't be worth taking them.

Problems: mixed conditional forms and incorrect verb forms. 'If I didn't have' requires 'I would take' (conditional). 'the pictures got them' is ungrammatical; use 'I would take pictures from the window'. 'the car will be so blurry' misuses 'car' — the view would be blurry, and tense should be conditional 'would be'. 'it doesn't worth to take' is incorrect; use 'it wouldn't be worth taking them.' Suggestion: use conditional structure 'If I didn't have..., I would...' and correct verb forms 'would take', 'would be', 'wouldn't be worth taking'.

× I definitely prefer this because the color and the sounds of the waves make me feel more calm and pleasant, you know, it helps me to be relaxed and also I find to see a bit exciting and mysterious and it's really enjoyable for me.

✓ I definitely prefer the sea because the colors and the sound of the waves make me feel calmer and more at peace; it helps me relax, and I also find it a bit exciting and mysterious. It's really enjoyable for me.

Problems: 'prefer this' is vague — specify 'the sea'; 'color' should be plural 'colors' when speaking generally; 'the sounds of the waves' is better as 'the sound of the waves' (collective); comparative 'more calm' should be 'calmer' and 'pleasant' is awkward here — 'more at peace' or 'pleasant' separately; 'helps me to be relaxed' -> 'helps me relax'; 'I find to see a bit exciting' is incorrect structure — use 'I find it a bit exciting'. Suggestion: specify the thing you prefer, use correct plural/singular for countable/uncountable nouns, use comparative forms (calmer), and use 'find it [adjective]' structure.