Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary (e.g., “sunrise” or “scenery” instead of “Sunnis”). Avoid repeating phrases like “the view of”.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy watching the scenery from the bus or car because it helps me relax. For example, I like watching the sunrise over the city and the changing landscapes along the road, which makes long journeys feel shorter.

Sugestão: Give a direct, grammatical response and provide a concise reason with one specific detail. Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases like “offenders” and fix subject-verb agreement. Use linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”) to connect ideas.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos from the car window because I prefer to enjoy the moment. For example, I find it more relaxing to watch the scenery and remember it rather than stopping to take pictures.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear statement, then give two specific supporting reasons linked coherently. Correct grammar (e.g., “prefer the mountains”, “I feel relaxed”, “the air is fresh”). Mention frequency as a simple extra detail.

Exemplo: I prefer the mountains. I feel relaxed there because the air is fresh and the environment is peaceful, and I enjoy the cool weather, so I try to visit the mountains once a year.

× Yes I do, whenever I traveling by the car or bus I am looking at the Sunnis and the view of the road and the view of and the every city and I prefer to go because it's help you reduce the stress during the travelling and it also keep your mind strict.

✓ Yes, I do. Whenever I travel by car or bus, I look at the scenery, the road and the cities. I prefer it because it helps reduce stress during travel and it also keeps your mind calm.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'traveling' (should be base form after 'whenever I'), incorrect progressive 'am looking' (simple present 'look' is used for habitual actions), wrong noun 'Sunnis' (likely meant 'scenery'), extra words 'the' and 'and the every city' removed, subject-verb agreement 'it's help' -> 'it helps', 'keep your mind strict' incorrect collocation -> 'keeps your mind calm'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions, ensure base verb form after time expressions, check subject-verb agreement, and choose correct vocabulary for meaning.

× No, I don't take the photos offenders in this outside the car's window because I not a guy who are like clicking the photo.

✓ No, I don't take photos out of the car window because I'm not the kind of person who likes taking pictures.

Errors: unnecessary word 'offenders' and awkward 'in this outside the car's window'. Quantifier/article misuse 'the photos' not needed; use 'photos' generally. Pronoun/verb agreement 'I not a guy who are like' -> 'I'm not the kind of person who likes'. Suggestion: Remove irrelevant words, use natural phrases ('out of the car window'), use contractions or auxiliary verbs for negation, and ensure relative clause subject-verb agreement.

× I can't like to take my own photo so I don't prefer to taking the photos and the same reason I'm only seeing and keep it on my own mind.

✓ I don't like taking my own photo, so I prefer not to take photos; for the same reason I just look and keep the view in my mind.

Errors: 'can't like to take' incorrect modal/verb structure; use 'don't like taking' (verb + -ing). 'Prefer to taking' should be 'prefer not to take' or 'prefer taking' but context needs 'prefer not to take'. 'I'm only seeing' incorrect progressive; use simple present 'I just look'. Suggestion: Use gerunds after verbs like 'like' and 'prefer', use correct negation ('prefer not to'), and use simple present for habitual actions.

× Definitely I prefer to mountain because in the mountain I feel relax and the environment and the air is very fresh and most of the time in the mountains the weather is very cold.

✓ Definitely I prefer the mountains because in the mountains I feel relaxed; the environment and the air are very fresh, and most of the time the weather in the mountains is very cold.

Errors: missing plural/article: 'prefer to mountain' -> 'prefer the mountains' or 'prefer mountains'. Inconsistent singular/plural 'in the mountain' -> 'in the mountains'. 'I feel relax' -> 'I feel relaxed' (adjective). Subject-verb agreement 'the environment and the air is' -> 'are'. Suggestion: Use plural 'mountains' when speaking generally, use correct adjective form 'relaxed', and match verb number to compound subjects.

× So cold weather is my favorite weather and I prefer to visit mountains once a year.

✓ So cold weather is my favorite, and I prefer to visit the mountains once a year.

Errors: repetitive 'cold weather is my favorite weather' -> shorten to 'my favorite'. Missing article before 'mountains' -> 'the mountains' for general preference, or just 'mountains'. Tense and structure otherwise fine. Suggestion: Avoid repetition, include definite article when referring to a specific category generally ('the mountains'), and keep simple present for habitual preferences.