Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thống nhất số, thì), dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và rút gọn câu lặp lại. Nên nối ý mạch lạc bằng liên từ đơn giản, sửa các cụm từ sai (ví dụ: "live my mood", "have it all beauty"). Giữ câu trả lời tự nhiên và ngắn gọn (tối đa 3–4 câu).

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window to enjoy the view. It helps me relax and recharge after a busy day, so I often take time to watch the scenery while travelling.

Sugestão: Cần sửa nhiều lỗi khiến ý không rõ: dùng từ đúng (ví dụ: "diet schedule", "go by birth" là sai nghĩa), nhất quán thì và chia động từ, tránh câu không có nghĩa. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp rồi minh họa ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể và liên từ rõ ràng.

Exemplo: Sometimes I take photos, but it depends on my mood and the situation. If I am calm and relaxed, I will take pictures to remember the view, but when I am in a hurry I usually don't take photos.

Sugestão: Sửa ngữ pháp (chia động từ, danh từ/đại từ), tránh lặp ý và dùng câu hỗ trợ rõ ràng với liên từ. Thay cụm vô nghĩa ("let my mood") bằng cách diễn đạt cảm xúc chính xác. Giữ câu súc tích, tối đa 3 câu, và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hoạt động yêu thích).

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and eating seafood. Going to the beach helps me relax and recharge, and I often take photos of the seascape to remember the experience.

× The scenery have it all beauty so I just want to go sightseeing.

✓ The scenery has all the beauty, so I just want to go sightseeing.

'Scenery' is an uncountable singular noun and requires a singular verb. Use 'has' not 'have'. Also 'it' is unnecessary and 'all the beauty' is a clearer phrase. Suggestion: treat 'scenery' as singular and match verb accordingly. Use commas to separate clauses.

× Whenever I feel overwhelmed by my diet schedule, I also go by birth and take some photo to let my mood.

✓ Whenever I feel overwhelmed by my diet schedule, I also go by bus and take some photos to lift my mood.

'By birth' is incorrect preposition/word; correct phrase is 'by bus' (mode of transport). 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' when referring to taking multiple pictures. 'To let my mood' is not idiomatic; use 'to lift my mood'. These are incorrect word choice and noun form errors; ensure proper vocabulary and pluralization.

× But whenever I just go because of busy time, I didn't do that.

✓ But when I am just going because I'm busy, I don't do that.

The original mixes past tense 'didn't' with present/frequent context. The question asks about usual behavior, so use present simple: 'I don't do that'. Also 'because of busy time' is ungrammatical; use 'because I'm busy' or 'when I'm busy'.

× If I had to choose, maybe the sea because I can go swim and eat seafood.

✓ If I had to choose, maybe the sea because I can go swimming and eat seafood.

'Go swim' is nonstandard; use the gerund 'go swimming' for the activity. This is an issue with verb form after 'go' where the -ing form is required.

× I likes it very much.

✓ I like it very much.

With subject 'I' the verb should be base form 'like', not 'likes'. 'Likes' is for third person singular subjects. Ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I can recharge my energy and let my mood when I go swimming and takes many photo of sea view.

✓ I can recharge my energy and lift my mood when I go swimming and take many photos of the sea view.

Multiple issues: 'let my mood' is incorrect, use 'lift my mood'. 'Takes' should be 'take' because subject 'I' requires base verb. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos'. 'Sea view' normally takes an article: 'the sea view' or better 'photos of the sea'. Use gerund 'swimming' correctly. Maintain consistent verb forms in the coordinated verbs.