Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and avoid fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and correct verb forms and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. When I travel by bus I usually sit by the window and look at the scenery because it helps me relax. For example, I like watching trees and small villages pass by, which makes long journeys feel shorter.

Sugestão: Be more specific and use correct noun phrases and verb agreement. Use linking words to connect reasons and an example. Avoid awkward phrases like “put the post there.”

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially flowers and fields. I usually post the best pictures on Instagram because they are beautiful and photographing nature helps me relax.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and explain with specific reasons. Correct vocabulary (e.g., "fresh air" not "fish, air") and grammar (plural/singular, articles). Use linking words like “however” or “in summer” to contrast choices. Keep it concise and coherent.

Exemplo: It depends on the season. In winter I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh air and quiet hiking trails; however, in summer I prefer the sea because I like swimming and sunbathing on the beach.

× Yes I do. When I traveling by bus I usually sit uh with window and look out at the scenery. It feel it feel relax and.

✓ Yes, I do. When I travel by bus I usually sit by the window and look out at the scenery. It feels relaxing.

Problems: present tense form and word choice. 'When I traveling' is incorrect; the base form 'travel' is required after 'when' for simple present habitual actions (present tense issue). 'sit uh with window' uses wrong preposition and article; correct is 'sit by the window' (preposition/article correction but primarily present tense and word choice). 'It feel it feel relax and' uses wrong verb form and adjective; use 'It feels relaxing.' Suggestion: use simple present 'I travel' for habitual actions, use 'by the window' for position, and use 'feels relaxing' to describe the effect.

× Of course, I like to take a photo of nature flower crown and put the post there on Instagram. It's very beautiful and help me relax.

✓ Of course, I like to take photos of natural flowers and post them on Instagram. They're very beautiful and help me relax.

Problems: noun forms and gerund/participle usage. 'a photo of nature flower crown' is ungrammatical; use plural 'photos' if habitual and 'natural flowers' or 'a crown of flowers' for correct noun phrases. 'put the post there on Instagram' is awkward; use verb 'post' and object 'them' to refer to photos. 'It's very beautiful and help me relax' has subject-verb agreement and unclear reference; 'They're very beautiful and help me relax' agrees in number. Suggestion: use correct noun phrases ('photos', 'natural flowers'), use 'post' as verb, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Well it depends on season. Uh, for example in the winter I prefer mountain because fish, air and the weather is nice on you. Not on the other hand on summer I first.

✓ Well, it depends on the season. For example, in the winter I prefer the mountains because the air and weather are nice. On the other hand, in summer I prefer the sea.

Problems: missing articles and plural forms, present tense and word choice. 'depends on season' needs article 'the season'. 'I prefer mountain' should be 'I prefer the mountains' (singular/plural and article). 'because fish, air and the weather is nice on you' is incoherent; likely meant 'because the air and the weather are nice'—use correct nouns and plural agreement ('are' with compound subject). 'Not on the other hand on summer I first' is disordered; correct phrase is 'On the other hand, in summer I prefer the sea.' Suggestion: include articles ('the'), use plural 'mountains', ensure subject-verb agreement, and rearrange clauses for clarity.