Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear: start with a concise topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons or an example. Avoid hesitations, false starts and unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘traveling by bus or car’ not a place name). Keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing the landscape. For example, I like watching trees, houses and people going about their day because it helps me relax and notice local life. Also, I sometimes try to guess what places are like and feel more connected to where I’m going.

Sugestão: Answer directly and add a clear reason with one concrete detail. Check grammar for verb forms and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘I enjoy photographing the sky because of its changing colors’). Use linking words such as ‘because’ or ‘so’ and avoid filler words like ‘um’ and repeated phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos from the car window, especially of the sky, because it changes color and creates interesting clouds. For instance, I once took a picture of a sunset that had pink and orange streaks, and I still use that photo as my phone wallpaper.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then support it with two specific reasons and a brief example. Use correct grammar (e.g., ‘The sea makes me feel calm’) and reduce hesitation. Use linking phrases such as ‘because’, ‘for example’, or ‘also’ to structure your answer coherently.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because its blue color and the sound of the waves make me feel calm and peaceful. For example, when I visit the beach I like to sit by the water and read a book while listening to the waves, which helps me relax and forget about stress.

× Oh, I often look out the window at the scenery when traveling by Barcelona because, umm, I, uh, very excited, uh, to obvious, uh, the nature and or role of people which are motivated in, out in the outside.

✓ Oh, I often look out the window at the scenery when traveling in Barcelona because I am very excited to observe nature and the behavior of people outside.

Multiple present-tense and structure problems: 'when traveling by Barcelona' is incorrect preposition use (should be 'in Barcelona') and also travel method confusion; 'I, uh, very excited' lacks the verb 'am' (present tense linking verb) so use 'I am very excited'; 'to obvious' is wrong word choice and form; use 'to observe' (verb infinitive). 'the nature and or role of people which are motivated in, out in the outside' is ungrammatical and wordy — replace with 'nature and the behavior of people outside.' Suggestion: simplify sentences, include proper linking verbs (am/is), use correct prepositions (in Barcelona), and choose correct verbs (observe).

× Yes, I always take a photo, especially the sky.

✓ Yes, I always take photos, especially of the sky.

Count/number and preposition issues: 'take a photo' is grammatical but sounds mismatched with 'always' implying repetition; plural 'photos' is more natural. Also need preposition 'of' after 'especially' when specifying the object. Suggestion: use plural for habitual actions and include correct prepositions ('of the sky').

× I really like take photos of the sky because I feel it's the head of variety of color in this and it's very mystery.

✓ I really like taking photos of the sky because I feel it has a wide variety of colors and it's very mysterious.

Verb + -ing form issue and adjective/adverb form problems: after 'like' use the -ing form 'taking' (Grammar type 8). 'it's the head of variety of color in this' is unnatural; use 'it has a wide variety of colors.' 'very mystery' uses noun instead of adjective; correct adjective is 'mysterious.' Suggestion: use gerunds after like, use natural collocations ('variety of colors'), and use correct adjective forms.

× I don't know, I I really excited with it.

✓ I don't know, I am really excited about it.

Missing linking verb and incorrect preposition: 'I I really excited' lacks 'am' (present tense linking verb) and 'excited with' is less common; use 'excited about' to express interest. Suggestion: include 'am' for present state and use 'about' with 'excited.'

× To be honest, I really uh, prefer sea because umm, I uh, uh, I really like a blue of the sea.

✓ To be honest, I really prefer the sea because I really like the blue of the water.

Article and noun choice errors: 'prefer sea' needs the definite article 'the sea.' 'a blue of the sea' is ungrammatical; say 'the blue of the water' or 'the sea's blue color.' Suggestion: use 'the' with unique natural features and rephrase 'blue of the sea' to a natural noun phrase.

× It's make me feel calm and I can, I, I feel peaceful.

✓ It makes me feel calm and peaceful.

Subject-verb agreement and redundancy: 'It's make' is incorrect; with subject 'It' use 'makes' (third person singular present). Also combining 'I can, I, I feel peaceful' is redundant — simply 'feel calm and peaceful.' Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement ('makes') and avoid repetition.

× I can relate when see it and it's so beautiful.

✓ I can relate when I see it, and it's so beautiful.

Missing subject in subordinate clause and verb form: 'when see it' needs subject 'I' and base verb 'see' is fine but include the subject. Also add comma before coordinating conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: always include explicit subject in clauses ('when I see it') and ensure punctuation for readability.