Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and correct verb forms and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I find that watching the passing scenery makes the journey feel shorter, and I especially enjoy observing local shops and landscapes because they tell me a lot about the place I’m visiting.

Sugestão: Answer directly, fix grammar and word choice, and add a brief reason with linking words. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Not usually. Because I’m either driving or the car is moving quickly, it’s difficult to take clear photos, so I prefer to simply watch and enjoy the view. If the scenery is special, I might ask someone else to take a picture for me.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and use accurate vocabulary. Avoid incorrect words and provide two specific reasons linked logically. Correct grammar: plural/singular, articles, and prepositions.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because there are more activities to do, such as swimming and sunbathing. Also, I enjoy the relaxed atmosphere and the opportunity to try water sports, whereas mountains tend to be quieter and less activity-focused.

× Yeah, I do it all times either while traveling by bus or by car.

✓ Yeah, I do it all the time, either while traveling by bus or by car.

Missing article 'the' before 'time' is an article error and common collocation; also 'all times' is incorrect phrase. Use 'all the time' to indicate frequency. Improve by memorizing common expressions for frequency such as 'all the time', 'often', 'usually'.

× Looking out the window help me past the times more quickly and seeing things interesting while traveling is could is something that is impressed.

✓ Looking out the window helps pass the time more quickly, and seeing interesting things while traveling is something that impresses me.

Multiple errors: subject-verb agreement and verb forms. 'Looking out the window' as a gerund phrase requires singular verb 'helps' (subject-verb agreement). 'Pass the time' is correct collocation, not 'past the times'. 'Seeing interesting things' is the correct noun phrase; 'is could is something that is impressed' mixes modals and passive incorrectly. Use active 'impresses me'. Suggest simplifying sentences and checking subject-verb agreement with gerunds.

× Normally not, because while driving I fight difficult to take photo of scenery outside the window, so I normally just look at the window, enjoy the environment, enjoy what I'm seeing.

✓ Normally not, because while driving I find it difficult to take photos of the scenery outside the window, so I usually just look out, enjoy the environment, and enjoy what I'm seeing.

Errors include wrong verb 'fight' instead of 'find' (vocabulary), missing 'it' after 'find', plural 'photos' preferred, and 'scenery' needs article 'the'. Also repetition 'normally' replaced with 'usually' for variety. Ensure correct object pronouns and collocations: 'find it difficult to' and 'look out' not 'look at the window'.

× I personally prefer going to the sea because there are more activity for you to see sex or attend such as swimming or sunbathing which I feel it the activity are more enjoyable than going to mountains.

✓ I personally prefer going to the sea because there are more activities for you to do or attend, such as swimming or sunbathing, which I feel are more enjoyable than going to the mountains.

Errors: 'more activity' should be plural 'more activities' (quantifier and count noun agreement). 'See sex' is likely a typo and inappropriate; corrected to 'do or attend'. 'Which I feel it the activity are' contains extra 'it' and wrong agreement; use 'which I feel are' because it refers to 'activities' (plural). Also 'going to mountains' needs the definite article: 'the mountains'. Suggest proofreading for typos and ensuring plural agreement with quantifiers.