Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural, correct minor errors, and add a linking phrase and a brief specific detail. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid awkward word choices like “call window.”

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the car window because I enjoy seeing different landscapes. For example, I often sketch interesting views or take photos to remember particular places. This helps me recall trips later and gives me ideas for art projects.

Sugestão: Use natural phrasing and correct grammar (e.g., “take photos” not “take photography”), combine short sentences with linking words, and give one specific example of a photo you took. Avoid vague phrases like “landscapes portrait.”

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos from the car window, especially at sunrise or sunset because the light is beautiful. For instance, last month I photographed the sun setting over the sea and captured its reflection on the water, which made a very vivid image.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and word choice, and avoid informal or negative phrasing like “hate.” Use linking words to add a reason and a brief specific example. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I love watching sunsets and their reflections on the water. I also avoid climbing mountains since I get tired quickly, so I spend time on beaches taking photos that I sometimes use as my profile picture.

× Yes, usually I watch scenery through the call window because I enjoy watching landscapes.

✓ Yes, usually I look at the scenery through the car window because I enjoy watching landscapes.

The preposition 'through' is acceptable but the verb 'watch scenery through the call window' is awkward and 'call' is a typo for 'car'. Use 'look at the scenery' which is natural collocation. Also correct 'call' to 'car'. Suggestion: use 'look at the scenery through the car window'.

× I often sketch or take pictures to remember the place.

✓ I often sketch or take pictures to remember the place.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. No correction needed. Left unchanged but included for completeness.

× Yes, I like to take photography of the landscape portrait through a car window.

✓ Yes, I like to take photographs of landscapes through the car window.

'Photography' is a mass noun referring to the activity; use 'photographs' for individual pictures. 'Landscape portrait' is contradictory; use 'landscapes' or 'landscape photos'. Also use 'the car window' to refer to the window of the vehicle.

× Because I admire landscapes portrait, I usually capture sunset and their reflection in the sea.

✓ Because I admire landscape photos, I usually capture the sunset and its reflection in the sea.

Use 'landscape photos' instead of 'landscapes portrait'. 'Sunset' is singular here so use the definite article 'the' and match pronoun number: 'its reflection' not 'their reflection'.

× Especially during morning time, it will be full of vibrance.

✓ Especially in the morning, it is full of vibrancy.

Use 'in the morning' rather than 'during morning time'. 'Will be' implies future; present simple 'is' fits general statement. 'Vibrance' is a noun but 'vibrancy' is more natural; could also use 'vibrant' as an adjective: 'it is very vibrant'.

× Or the sea, I prefer sea because I love the sunset view and their reflection in the sea.

✓ I prefer the sea because I love the sunset view and its reflection in the water.

Sentence begins awkwardly with 'Or the sea'. Remove that. Use 'the sea' with definite article. Match pronoun: 'its reflection' not 'their reflection'. Avoid repetitive 'in the sea' by using 'in the water' or 'on the sea'.

× Where else I hate climbing mountains since I get tired very soon so I usually stay near the beach and took beautiful pictures and keep it as my profile pic.

✓ Besides, I dislike climbing mountains because I get tired very quickly, so I usually stay near the beach, take beautiful pictures, and keep them as my profile picture.

'Where else' is incorrect here; use 'Besides' or 'Also'. Use 'dislike' rather than 'hate' for milder tone, though 'hate' is not ungrammatical. Tense inconsistency: 'took' should be present 'take' to match habitual action. Use adverb 'quickly' rather than 'very soon'. Maintain plural agreement: 'pictures' -> 'them' and 'profile picture' singular. Use commas to separate clauses and items in the list.