Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Исправьте лексические ошибки и упростите структуру предложения. Говорите «scenery» вместо «scanner», используйте простое связное предложение: тема → причина → эффект. Сократите паузы и лишние слова, используйте правильные времена и артикли. Например, добавьте связку «because» и уточняющее пояснение, избегайте грамматических ошибок в местоимениях и формах глаголов.

Exemplo: Yes, I often look out at the scenery when I travel by bus or car because I find the views relaxing. For example, seeing trees and rivers helps me unwind after a busy day.

Sugestão: Устраните паузы и повторения, исправьте произношение и грамматику. Используйте правильную форму глагола («take photos») и слово «scenery». Дайте одно связное предложение с примером и объяснением результата. Добавьте связующее слово (for example, because) чтобы показать логику.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of the scenery outside the window because they remind me of special trips. For example, I often keep pictures of sunsets and mountains to look back on later.

Sugestão: Сделайте ответ более естественным и точным: используйте правильные предлоги («go to the mountains»), согласование времен и расширьте причину предпочтения с конкретным примером. Используйте связки («because», «for example») для логики и избегайте ошибок в форме глаголов («helps» вместо «helped»).

Exemplo: I prefer the mountains, especially in summer, because I enjoy hiking and fresh air. For example, I often go to the mountains with friends to hike and relax, which really helps reduce my stress.

× Of course I look out the window at the scanner when traveling by bus or car because it's very comfortable and this view which fall it's help me relaxing.

✓ Of course I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because it's very comfortable and this view helps me relax.

Several issues: 'scanner' is a wrong word; the correct word is 'scenery' (lexical choice). 'Which fall' is ungrammatical and unnecessary; remove it (sentence structure). 'It's help me relaxing' has subject-verb agreement and verb form errors: use 'helps' for third person singular and the base verb 'relax' after 'help' (not 'relaxing'). Overall, simplify the relative clause and correct word choice. Suggestion: use concise clauses and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Yes, uh, I enjoy take a photos of the scanner outside the car window. Uh, it's uh, remind, uh, it's become memories and the reminder memories.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking photos of the scenery outside the car window. It reminds me of memories and becomes a reminder.

Multiple mistakes: 'enjoy take a photos' uses incorrect verb form and article; after 'enjoy' use gerund 'taking' and use 'photos' without 'a' or use 'a photo' for singular (quantifier/article error). 'scanner' should be 'scenery' (word choice). 'it's uh, remind' is wrong verb form; use 'it reminds' (third person singular). 'it's become memories and the reminder memories' is ungrammatical — use 'becomes a reminder' or 'reminds me of memories'. Clarify meaning and use correct verb forms and articles. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I prefer the mountains, especially in summer. I usually go out the mountains with my friends. It's helped me reduce stress.

✓ I prefer the mountains, especially in summer. I usually go to the mountains with my friends. It helps me reduce stress.

Errors: 'go out the mountains' is incorrect preposition and structure; use 'go to the mountains' (preposition error). 'It's helped me reduce stress' mixes present perfect with unclear subject; better in simple present 'It helps me reduce stress' to match habitual action. Also ensure consistency in tense and use of contractions if desired. Suggest using 'go to' for destinations and simple present for habitual facts. Grammar problem type ID:11