Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và chọn từ phù hợp. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó phát triển với chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh từ sai như “city skins”, “Seeing interested” và lỗi số nhiều/ít (cars). Dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” để nối ý, và giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the scenery. I especially like observing different buildings and people on the streets, as it helps me relax. Sometimes I try to notice small details like shop signs or street art so the journey feels more memorable.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: “asked check”, “kiss memories”, “unusual stress”). Cần câu chủ đề rõ ràng trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No), sửa thì và danh từ số nhiều/ít, và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “for example” để rõ ràng hơn. Giữ 2–3 câu súc tích.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I like to keep memories of the places I visit. For example, I usually photograph interesting buildings or unusual views so I can look back at them later.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần chính xác về từ vựng và ngữ pháp. Tránh tiếng lắp (uh), sửa cụm từ sai như “driving corals” và “ocean blue up the sea”. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp với câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu 1–2 lí do cụ thể, dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “also” để nối ý. Giữ 2–3 câu ngắn gọn.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I enjoy beach activities like swimming and snorkeling. I also love the view of the blue ocean, which I find very relaxing.

× I usually look out of the window when traveling by bus or cars because I enjoy watching the scenery and city skins.

✓ I usually look out of the window when traveling by bus or car because I enjoy watching the scenery and city scenes.

'out of the window' is acceptable but 'look out the window' is more natural; 'cars' should be singular 'car' to match 'bus' in general reference (use uncountable/general form). 'city skins' is incorrect word choice; use 'city scenes'. Use consistent preposition use and noun choice to convey meaning clearly.

× Seeing interested in buildings and people on the streets helps me relax and make the journey more memorable.

✓ Seeing interesting buildings and people on the streets helps me relax and makes the journey more memorable.

The phrase 'Seeing interested in' is incorrect; 'interesting' should modify 'buildings'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'Seeing ... helps' is fine but the second verb should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'Seeing ...'.

× I asked check the photos up the scenery outside the car windows because I want to kiss memories of the cities I visits.

✓ I often check the photos of the scenery outside the car windows because I want to keep memories of the cities I visit.

'I asked check' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'I often check' or 'I check'. 'up' is an incorrect preposition here; use 'of'. 'kiss memories' is incorrect word choice; use 'keep memories'. 'I visits' has subject-verb agreement error; use 'I visit' (present simple) to match 'want to keep'.

× For example, I like to capture unusual stress or view so I can look back on the trip later.

✓ For example, I like to capture unusual scenes or views so I can look back on the trip later.

'unusual stress' is incorrect collocation; likely meant 'unusual scenes'. 'view' should be plural 'views' to match 'scenes' or use consistent noun forms.

× Uh, I prefer the sea because I can enjoy some activities on the beautiful beach such as swimming or driving corals, and I also am impressed by the ocean blue up the sea.

✓ Uh, I prefer the sea because I can enjoy activities on the beautiful beach such as swimming or diving for corals, and I am also impressed by the ocean's blue color.

'some activities' is acceptable but 'activities' without 'some' is natural; 'driving corals' is incorrect verb, use 'diving for corals' or 'diving among corals'. 'I also am impressed by the ocean blue up the sea' has wrong word order and preposition; use 'I am also impressed by the ocean's blue color'.