Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, correct grammar, avoid redundancy and give one clear supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific example. Use correct articles and verb forms.

Exemplo: Yes. I live in the city center, so there are several tall apartment blocks nearby. For example, my own building is about 20 stories high and stands beside a large shopping arcade.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct noun phrases and word choice, and use linking words to connect ideas. Limit to two or three short sentences and give a specific example of what you photograph and where.

Exemplo: Sometimes. I enjoy photographing modern architecture, especially glass-fronted office buildings. For example, when I travel I often take pictures of contemporary museums and large shopping centers.

Sugestão: Use a clear topic sentence and correct singular/plural and prepositions. Give a specific type of building or a named example to make the answer more concrete, and use a linking word to explain why.

Exemplo: I don't have a particular building in mind right now, but I would love to visit famous museums abroad. For example, I hope to see the Guggenheim in Bilbao because I want to study its unique architecture and contemporary art.

Sugestão: Give a clear position and avoid vague or unfinished sentences. Correct word order and repetition, and provide two specific benefits. Keep it concise and coherent using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I would consider living in a tall building because it often offers great views and quieter living above street level. For instance, I like the idea of relaxing on a rooftop terrace in the evening and enjoying the city skyline.

× Yes, as I live in the city center and there is a many shops and supermarkets nearby.

✓ Yes, as I live in the city center and there are many shops and supermarkets nearby.

The error is using 'a' before 'many shops' and singular 'is' with plural noun. 'Many shops' is plural, so use the plural verb 'are' and remove the indefinite article 'a'. Suggestion: match verb number to the noun (are for plural) and do not use 'a' before 'many'.

× For example, the building that I currently live in is considered a very tall and have.

✓ For example, the building that I currently live in is considered very tall and impressive.

The original sentence mixes structures and ends with an incorrect verb 'have' that doesn't fit. Use adjectives after 'is considered' (e.g., 'very tall and impressive') rather than adding a verb. Suggestion: follow 'is considered' with adjective phrases or a noun phrase, and ensure parallelism in the adjectives.

× Sometimes yes, I like to take photos for modern architectures buildings.

✓ Sometimes, yes, I like to take photos of modern architectural buildings.

Incorrect preposition 'for' and wrong noun form 'architectures'. Use 'of' to indicate what you photograph and 'architectural' as the adjective modifying 'buildings' (or simply 'modern architecture' as a noun: 'photos of modern architecture'). Suggestion: use 'of' + noun/object and correct adjective form.

× For example, during my traveling traps I like to take photos for the museums shopping center.

✓ For example, during my travels I like to take photos of museums and shopping centers.

Several issues: 'traveling traps' is incorrect wording; use 'travels' or 'trips'. Use 'of' not 'for' to indicate the object of photographing, and 'museums and shopping centers' should be plural and parallel. Suggestion: simplify to 'during my travels' and use correct nouns and prepositions.

× At the moment I don't have specific building in mind, but I would love to visit buildings in other country to be familiar with the art, with their architectures.

✓ At the moment I don't have a specific building in mind, but I would love to visit buildings in other countries to become familiar with their art and architecture.

Missing article 'a' before 'specific building'. 'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' or 'another country' depending on meaning. 'Be familiar with the art, with their architectures' is awkward: use 'become familiar with their art and architecture'. Suggestion: include necessary articles, match singular/plural, and use common collocations 'art and architecture'.

× If I had a chance, why not? Rising buildings often give you a chance to enjoy the scenery and view from rooftop and to to relax in the evenings and also invite your.

✓ If I had the chance, why not? High-rise buildings often give you a chance to enjoy the scenery and views from the rooftop, to relax in the evenings, and to invite your friends over.

Multiple issues: 'a chance' better as 'the chance' in this context. 'Rising buildings' is unnatural; use 'high-rise buildings'. 'View' should be plural 'views'. Missing article 'the rooftop'. Duplicated 'to to'. 'Invite your' is incomplete; likely 'invite your friends over'. Suggestion: use idiomatic expressions ('high-rise', 'the rooftop'), correct pluralization, remove duplicate words, and complete the object of 'invite'.