Part 1
Examinador
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Candidato
Uh yes, there are several tall building near my home including a building called uh uh, including a shopping mall called Tondo. I often go there to buy clothes and watch movies with my friends because it has a good cinema and many store.
Examinador
Do you take photos of buildings?
Candidato
I know I don't like take photos of buildings. I prefer to take photo of some views such as mountains, rivers, oceans. I prefer to like natural, natural atmosphere. Uh, so I don't like take photos of.
Examinador
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Candidato
I would like to visit a building called Tom Door, which is a shopping mall. I usually go to go there to buy my clothes or watch movies with my friend. I think he's very useful and practical.
Examinador
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Candidato
Ah yes, of course I want to live in a tall building. Uh, I think tall building is very convenient uh like near my nearby my home called Tom Doo, which is a shopping mall. I usually go there to buy my clothes and watch movies with my friends. I think I think he's very practical and.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 注意句子結構與流利度,避免過多停頓的填充詞(如 uh, um)。名詞要使用正確的單複數形式(building → buildings, store → stores)。回答時先用一句主句直接回答問題,再用一到兩句具體細節支持,使用連接詞使語意更連貫。例如:‘Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. One of them is a shopping mall called Tondo, which has a good cinema and many shops. I often go there to buy clothes and watch films with my friends.’ 練習時可先默背這類短篇回答並注意發音和停頓,避免重複同一信息。
Exemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. One of them is a shopping mall called Tondo, which has a good cinema and many shops. I often go there to buy clothes and watch films with my friends.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 注意時態和動詞形式(如 don't like taking photos、prefer taking photos)。避免重複同一詞語(natural, natural)和不完整句子。回答結構應為一個主句表明立場,然後用一到兩個具體例子支持,並用連接詞使句子流暢。例如:'No, I don't usually take photos of buildings. Instead, I prefer photographing natural scenery such as mountains and oceans because I like the peaceful atmosphere.' 練習時可寫下兩三個支持點並連成完整句子,然後大聲朗讀以提高流利度與連貫性。
Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings. Instead, I prefer photographing natural scenery such as mountains and oceans because I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere they create.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 回答要明確並避免前後矛盾(want to visit vs usually go there)。若提到想參觀的建築,說明原因或該建築的特色。注意代詞用法(它 → it,而不是 he),以及不要重複動詞(go to go)。建議回答結構:一句主句說明是否想去,接著用一兩句說明原因或特點。例如:'Yes, I'd like to visit Tom Door, a large shopping mall. It has a wide range of stores and a good cinema, so I think it would be fun to explore.' 練習時先想兩個理由支持你的選擇並用連接詞連起來。
Exemplo: Yes, I'd like to visit Tom Door, a large shopping mall. It has many shops and a popular cinema, so I think it would be interesting to explore and maybe buy some clothes.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 注意表達理由時要清晰且不重複。修正語法問題(a tall building、near my home、Tom Doo → Tom Door/ Tondo),避免使用代詞錯誤(he → it)。回答時先直接回答,再給出具體原因與一兩個例子,用連接詞連接句子並控制句子數量(不超過五句)。例如:'Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it is usually convenient and close to shops and public transport. For example, living near a mall like Tom Door would make shopping and going to the cinema easy.' 練習時把答案分成三部分:立場、兩個具體理由、簡短結論。
Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it is often convenient and close to shops and public transport. For example, living near a mall like Tom Door would make shopping and going to the cinema very easy.
× there are several tall building near my home
✓ there are several tall buildings near my home
原句中使用了複數限定詞“several”,但名詞“building”仍為單數。英文中當有多個物件時,名詞需使用複數形式。建議:遇到 several、many、few 等詞時,將名詞改為複數(building → buildings)。
× it has a good cinema and many store
✓ it has a good cinema and many stores
“many” 表示多數,因此後面的名詞應為複數。原句使用單數“store”不符合數一致。建議:遇到 many、several、few 等,名詞用複數形式(store → stores)。
× I know I don't like take photos of buildings
✓ I know I don't like to take photos of buildings
在否定句中,動詞“like”後接不定式時更常見形式為“to take”或動名詞“taking”。但在此上下文中使用“不定式 to take”更自然。原句缺少不定式標記 to。建議:在 like 後可用 to + 動詞或動名詞,但保持一致性(don't like to take)。
× I prefer to take photo of some views such as mountains, rivers, oceans
✓ I prefer to take photos of some views such as mountains, rivers, and oceans
此處表達多張或多種景物,名詞“photo”需改為複數“photos”。另外在列舉多項時在最後兩項間加 and 更符合英語慣用。建議:多項或泛指時使用複數(photo → photos)。
× I prefer to like natural, natural atmosphere
✓ I prefer a natural atmosphere
原句重複使用“prefer”和“like”語義重疊且不自然;“natural” 為形容詞需修飾名詞“atmosphere”,若表達偏好某種氛圍,應使用 “prefer a natural atmosphere”。建議:避免冗餘動詞重複,使用正確的形容詞+名詞結構。
× so I don't like take photos of
✓ so I don't like taking photos of buildings
結尾缺少賓語且動詞形式不正確。like 後若使用動名詞,應為 taking;同時需明確賓語(buildings 或 landscapes)。建議:使用 taking 並補上賓語(photos of buildings)。
× I would like to visit a building called Tom Door, which is a shopping mall
✓ I would like to visit a building called Tom Door, which is a shopping mall
此句本身語法正確,無需更改。建議:保持原句。
× I usually go to go there to buy my clothes or watch movies with my friend
✓ I usually go there to buy clothes or watch movies with my friends
原句中出現重複動詞“go to go”,需要刪除多餘部分;“my friend” 若指與多位朋友則應為 friends;同時“my clothes” 可簡化為 clothes。建議:刪除重複動詞,根據語境選擇單數或複數的 friend。
× I think he's very useful and practical
✓ I think it's very useful and practical
原句用代詞“he”指代購物中心或建築不當,應使用中性代詞“it”指物體或場所。建議:對物體或建築使用 it 而非 he/she。
× I think tall building is very convenient uh like near my nearby my home called Tom Doo, which is a shopping mall
✓ I think tall buildings are very convenient, like the one near my home called Tom Doo, which is a shopping mall
原句存在多處問題:1) “tall building” 應為複數或加定冠詞單數形式;2) 主謂數一致需要調整為 buildings are;3) “near my nearby my home” 為重複詞語,需刪除冗餘並明確指代。建議:根據想表達的意義選擇複數(tall buildings are)或單數加定冠詞(the tall building is),並刪除重複詞。
× I think I think he's very practical and
✓ I think it's very practical
同樣地,句中把購物中心或建築稱為 he 不合適,應使用 it;此外原句重複“I think I think”,需要刪除重複。建議:刪除重複片語,對物使用 it。