Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は直接的で内容も分かりやすいですが、文法（冠詞や動詞の形）と語順の改善が必要です。また、情報を補足する際は接続詞を使い、具体性を高めるとよいでしょう。例えば “the Tokyo Tower” や “it lights up” のような正確な表現、そして理由や頻度などを一文で付け加える練習をしてください。

Exemplo: Yes, there are. The Tokyo Tower is near my house, and it lights up every night, so I often enjoy the beautiful view from my window.

Sugestão: 良い応答ですが、繰り返しを避け、流れを滑らかにするための接続表現を使うとさらに自然になります。具体的な頻度や撮る対象（古い建物や現代建築など）を挙げると説得力が増します。また時制や語順を整え、“remember the feeling” をより自然に表現する練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially historic ones. When I look at those pictures later, they remind me of the scenery and the feelings I had at that time.

Sugestão: 答えは具体的ですが、文法ミス（不定詞の使い方や所有格、表現の自然さ）と語彙選択の改善が必要です。施設名が不明確（“Kiwi” が正しいか確認）なら正しい名称を使い、理由は一つに絞って詳しく説明するとよいです。接続詞で論理を整理し、「日本の歴史を感じる」など自然な表現に直してください。

Exemplo: Yes. I would like to visit Kiyomizu-dera in Kyoto because the temple is very old and visiting it would help me feel traditional Japanese culture and history.

Sugestão: 内容は伝わりますが、言い換えが冗長で、躊躇語（uh）を減らす必要があります。理由を一つにまとめ、具体的な利点（眺め、利便性、静けさなど）を挙げて接続語でつなぐと自然です。語彙を少し豊かにして感情表現を整理しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the view would be spectacular and calming. Additionally, tall buildings often have convenient facilities, which makes daily life easier.

× Near my house there is a Tokyo Tower and it's always lights up every night and so it's very beautiful.

✓ Near my house there is Tokyo Tower and it always lights up every night, so it is very beautiful.

The phrase 'a Tokyo Tower' is incorrect because Tokyo Tower is a unique landmark and should be treated as a proper noun without an indefinite article (singular/plural issue). 'it's always lights up' mixes subject contraction with a verb form; correct form is 'it always lights up' (subject-verb agreement). Suggestion: omit 'a' before proper landmark names and use 'it always lights up' to match the simple present tense for habitual action.

× I I also like taking pictures because when I see them again I remember that scenery or the feeling then.

✓ I also like taking pictures because when I see them again I remember the scenery and the feelings I had then.

The original has redundancy 'I I' and awkward phrase 'that scenery or the feeling then.' Use plural 'feelings' for clarity if multiple emotions, and 'the scenery' without 'that' is more natural. Keep 'taking' which correctly uses verb + -ing after 'like'. Suggestion: remove duplicate word and rephrase to 'remember the scenery and the feelings I had then.'

× I want visit to Kiwi in Kyoto because its building has a very long history and I think when I visit it I can feel Japanese culture or Japanese old history.

✓ I want to visit Kiyomizu-dera in Kyoto because its building has a very long history, and I think when I visit it I can experience Japanese culture and its history.

'want visit to' is incorrect; after 'want' use infinitive 'to visit' not noun phrase (verb in the present participle/purpose error). 'Kiwi' seems to be a mistaken name; likely 'Kiyomizu-dera' or another temple—use the correct place name. 'Japanese old history' is unnatural; use 'history' or 'its history.' Suggestion: use 'want to visit' and more natural collocations like 'experience Japanese culture and its history.'

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building because, uh, living in a tall building. The view from there is maybe very beautiful and moving.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because the view from there would be very beautiful and moving.

The original includes a fragment 'living in a tall building.' and repetitive phrasing. 'Maybe very beautiful' is awkward; use 'would be' to express hypothetical desirability. Suggestion: combine into one complete sentence and use modal/hypothetical 'would be' for potential outcomes.