Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and directly answer first, then add one or two clear supporting details. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'high-rise', 'greenery', 'it is quite good', 'helps reduce pollution'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly. Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: No, there are no high-rise buildings near my home because I live in the countryside. This is good because we have lots of greenery and fresh air, which helps reduce noise and pollution.

Sugestão: Start with a direct response, then give specific reasons and use linking words. Fix grammar: 'greenery' (uncountable), 'when I travel', 'It's nice to share them with my family.' Keep it to two or three sentences and avoid fragments.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually photograph buildings. However, I often take photos of greenery or mountain views when I travel because those scenes are beautiful and I like sharing them with my family.

Sugestão: Answer clearly ('Yes, I'd like to visit the Burj Khalifa'), avoid filler words ('umm'), and use correct verb forms and conditional structures ('If I had the chance and enough money, I would go there'). Add one specific reason. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I'd like to visit the Burj Khalifa. If I had the chance and enough money, I would go there to take photos and to learn more about the culture and architecture of the UAE.

Sugestão: Start with a clear direct answer, then give two precise reasons. Correct phrasing: 'in my view', 'more susceptible to earthquake damage', 'I prefer to live in a rural area', 'greenery'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I think they are more susceptible to earthquake damage. I prefer rural areas where there is more greenery and I can enjoy mountain views.

× Well, there are no high rise buildings nearby it quite good and the view is so much have a greeneries because we are in the countryside.

✓ Well, there are no high-rise buildings nearby; it's quite good and the view has a lot of greenery because we are in the countryside.

Multiple issues: 'There are no high rise buildings nearby' is acceptable but 'nearby it quite good' lacks a verb and pronoun use; corrected to 'nearby; it's quite good'. 'The view is so much have a greeneries' mixes structures and uses incorrect noun form. Use 'the view has a lot of greenery'. Use of 'high-rise' hyphenated and 'greenery' uncountable noun. Suggestion: separate ideas with punctuation and use correct noun forms and verbs.

× Additionally, it it is much helpful for us to have a greenery race so that it can help us reduce.

✓ Additionally, it is very helpful for us to have greenery so that it can help reduce pollution.

Errors: duplicated 'it it', awkward phrase 'have a greenery race' (nonsense) and wrong modifier 'much helpful'. Use 'very helpful' and 'have greenery' (uncountable). Also add a clear object for 'reduce' such as 'pollution'. Suggest: remove duplicate words and choose appropriate collocations.

× No, I don't usually take photos of buildings but I'd love to have a photograph with a greeneries or some mountain views.

✓ No, I don't usually take photos of buildings, but I'd love to have a photograph with greenery or some mountain views.

Error: 'a greeneries' mixes article and plural; 'greenery' is uncountable so use no article. Also needed a comma before 'but'. Suggest using correct noun form and punctuation.

× Especially when I'm on my travel.

✓ Especially when I'm traveling.

'On my travel' is not idiomatic; use 'traveling' or 'on my travels'. The present continuous 'I'm traveling' fits the context. Suggest using common collocations: 'on my travels' or 'when I travel'.

× It's quite helpful and for me to share it with my family.

✓ It's quite helpful for me to share it with my family.

Extra conjunction 'and' is incorrect. Remove 'and' to form correct infinitive phrase 'helpful for me to share'. Suggest simplify sentence structure.

× Yes, it is Burj Khalifa.

✓ Yes, it's the Burj Khalifa.

Definite article is required before a unique landmark: 'the Burj Khalifa'. Also contraction 'it's' is natural. Suggest include 'the'.

× If I have given a chance to travel and have that money, I would love to umm, go there and take a photo and also I I also wanted to explore the different cultures in the country.

✓ If I were given a chance to travel and had the money, I would love to go there, take a photo, and explore the different cultures in the country.

Conditionals: use past subjunctive 'If I were given' or 'If I had the chance' and 'had the money' for unreal present/future. Remove duplicate 'I I' and change 'wanted' to 'want' or keep parallel conditional 'would love ... and explore'. Suggest learn second conditional structure: If + past, would + base verb.

× No, because in my point of view it is much susceptible in terms of earthquake disaster.

✓ No, because in my point of view it is very vulnerable to earthquakes.

'Much susceptible' is unidiomatic; use 'very vulnerable'. 'In terms of earthquake disaster' is awkward; use 'to earthquakes'. Suggest choose common collocations: 'vulnerable to earthquakes'.

× So I usually prefer to stay in a rural areas where we can see much more of greeneries and enjoy a breathtaking view in the mountains.

✓ So I usually prefer to stay in rural areas where we can see much more greenery and enjoy breathtaking mountain views.

Errors: 'a rural areas' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a'. 'greeneries' is incorrect plural of 'greenery' (uncountable). 'a breathtaking view in the mountains' better as 'breathtaking mountain views' for natural phrasing. Suggest match articles and number and use uncountable noun forms.