Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and directly answer the question first, then add one or two specific details. Correct grammar (use singular/plural, verbs, articles) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'also' or 'because' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes. I live in a tall, modern apartment building nearby. It has an attractive façade with a dark blue exterior and a contemporary design, so it stands out in the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'. Simplify and correct tense and pronouns, and avoid repeating the same idea.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings because they remind me of places I visited. I usually share the pictures with my family so they can see the design and atmosphere of the place.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer naming the building, then give clear, specific reasons why you want to visit. Use correct sentence structure and vocabulary; avoid filler words. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to explain.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Baiyoke Tower because it is one of the tallest buildings in my city. It also has a famous rooftop restaurant where I could enjoy panoramic views of the skyline.

Sugestão: Answer directly and then give one or two clear, specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'security cameras' instead of 'CCTV' if unsure) and correct phrases for noise (e.g., 'less noise'). Avoid fillers and unclear words; use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I think it would be safer due to security cameras and controlled access. It would also be quieter than street-level housing, which makes it easier to relax.

× Yes, the tall building in my home is 1 building because I live in the tall building as well.

✓ Yes, the tall building near my home is one building because I live in that tall building as well.

The sentence mixes singular/plural and uses '1' instead of the word 'one'. Use 'one' in text and change 'in my home' to 'near my home' or 'that tall building' for clarity. Also replace 'the tall building in my home' (incorrect) with 'the tall building near my home' or 'that tall building' to keep singular reference consistent.

× The tall building near my home is is really nice building.

✓ The tall building near my home is a really nice building.

There is a duplicated verb 'is is' and the indefinite article 'a' is missing before 'really nice building'. Remove the extra 'is' and add 'a' to form a correct noun phrase.

× They decide the back color and really model.

✓ They decided the background color and the overall design.

Pronoun 'They' is vague; context likely refers to building designers or owners. 'Decide' should be past tense 'decided' to match narrative, and 'back color' is not idiomatic — use 'background color'. 'Really model' is unclear; 'overall design' conveys intended meaning. Adjust pronoun and word choice for clarity.

× Yes, I take photo of the building because that can, uh, remind me for the remember was I go was I spend time with the building or when I see the very beautiful or very nice building, I have to take a picture and share for my family and share with my family.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings because that can remind me of when I visited or spent time near a building. When I see a very beautiful building, I have to take a picture and share it with my family.

Use plural 'photos' and 'buildings' for general habits. Replace 'remind me for the remember was I go was I spend time with the building' with 'remind me of when I visited or spent time near a building' to fix structure and preposition use. Use 'share it with my family' instead of 'share for my family'.

× The building does I would like to visit is the tall building are in my uh, quarantine.

✓ The building I would like to visit is the tall building in my area that I saw during quarantine.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and preposition 'are in my quarantine' is wrong. Use correct relative clause order 'The building I would like to visit is...' and 'in my area' or 'that I saw during quarantine' for clarity.

× We say the bike joke is very very tall building and they have a very nice Li restaurant.

✓ We say the Baiyoke (Baiyoke) Tower is a very, very tall building and it has a very nice sky restaurant.

Subject-verb agreement: use singular 'it has' for a single building. 'Bike joke' seems to be a misheard name; clarify to correct proper noun (example: Baiyoke Tower). Add article 'a' before 'very, very tall building' and correct 'Li restaurant' to 'sky restaurant' if intended, or keep actual restaurant name. Ensure the building name and facility are accurate.

× Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the tall building uh, make me feel like safe and they have CCTV and uh, don't have a loss of the, umm, the noise of the Cowboys.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it makes me feel safe; they have CCTV, and I would not be disturbed by a lot of outside noise.

Change 'make' to 'makes' for subject-verb agreement with singular 'it' (the building). Replace 'they have CCTV' is acceptable but use consistent subject reference. 'Don't have a loss of the noise of the Cowboys' is ungrammatical and unclear; interpret as 'would not be disturbed by a lot of outside noise'. Use modal or conditional 'would not be disturbed' to express preference. Also simplify pronoun references for clarity.