Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Work on clarity, grammar and conciseness. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one brief specific detail. Use correct nouns and verb forms (e.g., "tall buildings" not "toll billing"), avoid hesitations, and keep to at most 3–4 short sentences. Use a linking word if you add a second point (e.g., "and" or "however").

Exemplo: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my apartment, and some of them are much higher than where I live. For example, there is a new office tower two blocks away that stands out in the skyline.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear, specific reason. Avoid repetition and correct vocabulary (e.g., "take photos" not "take off"). Use one linking word to introduce your reason (e.g., "because" or "so"). Keep sentences short and grammatically correct. Provide an example of what you prefer to photograph for contrast.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually photograph buildings because they don't interest me much. Instead, I prefer taking photos of people and street scenes, for example when I visit markets or festivals.

Sugestão: Be specific about the building's name and location, and give one or two clear reasons using linking words (e.g., "because" and "and"). Correct word choice (e.g., "landmark" and "historical importance") and reduce hesitations. Keep to two or three sentences with one specific detail about its history or features.

Exemplo: I'd like to visit the Bitterrock Fortress in the coastal capital because it is the most famous landmark in our country. It has great historical importance and offers panoramic views of the sea.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two concise, specific reasons. Replace vague/emotional words (e.g., "disgusting") with precise reasons (e.g., "I feel unsafe" or "I prefer quiet and space"). Use a linking word to connect reason and, if possible, offer a brief comparison (e.g., "rather than" or "instead"). Avoid filler words and broken sentences.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I prefer quieter, low-rise neighbourhoods and more outdoor space. Instead of an apartment tower, I would choose a house with a garden.

× Uh to be honest, I have a lot of toll billing near my apartment and sometimes told they're the buildings.

✓ Uh, to be honest, I have a lot of tall buildings near my apartment and sometimes I call them buildings.

Original sentence uses incorrect words ('toll billing', 'told') and omits a subject for 'call'. This is primarily a pronoun and word choice issue: 'they're the buildings' is awkward; replace with 'I call them buildings' to show the speaker referring to those structures. Also correct 'toll billing' to 'tall buildings'. Suggestion: use clear subject and correct nouns and verbs.

× The buildings is are taller than my apartment and yes.

✓ The buildings are taller than my apartment.

Original has redundant forms 'is are' and wrong verb agreement. 'Buildings' is plural, so use plural verb 'are'. Remove 'is' and the unnecessary 'and yes'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with plural subject and avoid redundancy.

× No, I'm I do not take off.

✓ No, I do not take photos.

Original contains jumbled words 'I'm I do not take off' and wrong verb 'take off'. This is a pronoun/word-choice error. Use 'I do not take photos' to clearly respond to question about taking photos. Suggestion: keep responses concise and match the noun asked (photos).

× I do not take a photo of building because it not rose my in a rose my interest interest and fundamentally different from my aim of taking photo or my desire or the landmark that I want.

✓ I do not take photos of buildings because they do not arouse my interest and are fundamentally different from the kinds of landmarks I want to photograph.

Multiple errors: article misuse ('a photo of building' should be 'photos of buildings'), pronoun number and verb agreement ('it not rose my interest' should be 'they do not arouse my interest'), and awkward phrasing. This falls under article errors and incorrect pronoun/verb usage. Suggestion: use plural nouns to match general statements, use correct verbs ('arouse'), and simplify phrasing.

× I would like to visit the, I think the bitterrock from capital of the coastal because there's usually the most interesting in landmark in our country and uh, it contains, uh, a great important have great importance of history, yes.

✓ I would like to visit, I think, the Bitter Rock near the capital on the coast because it's usually the most interesting landmark in our country and it has great historical importance.

Errors include incorrect or missing articles ('the coastal', 'the most interesting in landmark'), capitalization ('Bitter Rock' as a proper noun), and awkward verb phrases. This is an article and sentence structure issue. Use 'the capital', 'on the coast', 'the most interesting landmark', and 'has great historical importance' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct articles before place names and concise noun phrases.

× Do you want to live in a tall building? Student: I would probably say no because uh, I'm not. I don't like umm, I don't like tall buildings and it's really exhaust disgusting and do not make sense.

✓ I would probably say no because I don't like tall buildings; they are exhausting, disgusting, and don't make sense to me.

Original contains fragmented sentence ('I'm not.'), repetition ('I don't like' twice), and incorrect adjective use ('exhaust disgusting'). This is a present tense and adjective/adverb error. Use present simple 'I don't like' and proper adjectives/adverbs: 'exhausting' (or 'exhausting and disgusting') and ensure subject-verb agreement in 'don't make sense'. Suggestion: avoid fragments, use correct adjective forms (exhausting), and combine ideas clearly.