Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời đúng hướng nhưng cần rút gọn, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó nêu 1–2 ví dụ rõ ràng và một chi tiết bổ sung (ví dụ: vị trí hoặc khoảng cách). Tránh lặp lại tên giống nhau và sửa lỗi phát âm/từ (ví dụ: "Diamond Palace").

Exemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, my apartment complex and the Diamond Palace shopping tower are both within a 10-minute walk. They dominate the skyline around my street.

Sugestão: Cần tránh lặp ý và dùng từ chính xác; giữ câu ngắn gọn (tối đa 4–5 câu). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu sở thích, sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: ánh sáng, kiến trúc) và đưa ví dụ về kiểu ảnh bạn thích chụp. Tránh dùng tính từ lặp lại như 'very' nhiều lần và sửa ngữ pháp (số ít/như 'buildings' vs 'a building').

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings because I like their architectural details and how light falls on them. For instance, I often take pictures of facades and rooftop lines during sunset because the warm light creates strong shadows and interesting textures.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng do dùng từ sai ("vancomycin" là tên thuốc). Hãy nêu rõ tên tòa nhà hoặc loại tòa nhà, nêu lý do cụ thể (kiến trúc, chức năng, cửa hàng bên trong), và liên kết với trải nghiệm bạn muốn có. Giữ tối đa 4 câu, tránh lặp từ như 'very big'.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Vincom Center, a well-known shopping mall in my city. I want to see its modern architecture and explore the many stores there, especially fashion boutiques and a large food court.

Sugestão: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng câu dài và lặp; cần cấu trúc rõ: nêu quan điểm, đưa 1–2 lý do rõ ràng với liên từ để nối ý. Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: 'security' not 'you got a security') và sửa ngữ pháp (sử dụng 'you have to register' hoặc 'visitors must register').

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it usually offers better security. For example, visitors often need to register at reception, and living close to many neighbors helps me feel more connected.

× Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home, such as my apartment, imperial garden, the nearby apartment.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home, such as the Imperial Garden and the nearby apartment building.

The sentence lists examples but uses inconsistent singular/plural and capitalization. 'Imperial Garden' is a proper noun and should be capitalized; 'apartment' should be 'apartment building' to match 'buildings' and avoid mixing singular 'my apartment' with plural 'buildings'. Use parallel structure when listing items. Suggestion: Use consistent noun forms and capitalization, e.g., 'the Imperial Garden and the nearby apartment building'.

× It is the Diamond palace in many many else.

✓ It is the Diamond Palace and many others.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Diamond Palace' is a proper noun and should be capitalized. 'Many many else' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'many others'. Suggestion: Keep noun capitalization and use standard expressions such as 'and many others'.

× Yes, I love taking photos of building because it is a very beautiful landscape.

✓ Yes, I love taking photos of buildings because they are very beautiful scenes.

'Building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'photos of' and general reference. Also 'landscape' is not the best collocation for buildings; 'scene' or 'sight' works better. Pronoun agreement: use 'they are' for plural. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and match pronouns accordingly; choose appropriate collocations.

× It is very enormous, giant like a very gigantic buildings.

✓ They are very enormous and giant, like very gigantic buildings.

Redundant and inconsistent adjective use: 'enormous', 'giant', 'gigantic' mean the same and shouldn't all be used together. 'A very gigantic buildings' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'buildings'. Subject should match plural 'they'. Suggestion: Use one strong adjective and correct article-number agreement, e.g., 'They are very gigantic' or 'They are enormous.'

× And I love taking photos about buildings of buildings because it is very beautiful and it is make me very proud, proud of where I live.

✓ And I love taking photos of buildings because they are very beautiful and they make me very proud of where I live.

Use 'photos of' not 'photos about'. Remove repetitive 'of buildings'. Pronoun and verb agreement: plural 'they' and 'make' instead of 'it is make'. Also avoid repetition 'proud, proud'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions and ensure subject-verb agreement with plural subjects.

× Yes, it is the vancomycin I want to.

✓ Yes, it is the Vincom I want to visit.

'Vancomycin' is a drug and likely a mistranscription; 'Vincom' or the building name should be used. 'It is the ... I want to' is awkward; add the verb 'visit'. Suggestion: Use the correct proper noun and include the verb to complete the idea, e.g., 'I want to visit it.'

× I would like to visit that building because it is very beautiful, very big, gigantic and also in there I could go shopping or buy new clothes, new shoes and many else.

✓ I would like to visit that building because it is very beautiful, very big and gigantic, and I could go shopping there to buy new clothes, new shoes and many other things.

Awkward phrase 'in there I could go shopping' should be 'I could go shopping there'. 'Many else' is incorrect; use 'many other things'. Use commas appropriately and avoid redundant adjectives. Suggestion: Place adverbial phrases correctly (shopping there) and use 'many other things' for enumeration.

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building because in a tall building you got a security, you feel very safe.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because in a tall building you have security and you feel very safe.

Use 'have' rather than colloquial 'got' in formal speech. 'Security' is uncountable here; no article needed. Use consistent pronoun 'you' and parallel verbs. Suggestion: Use standard modal/auxiliary verbs and formal expressions: 'you have security'.

× You got you have to register to go there and also there are many people around you, so you feel really connected.

✓ You have to register to live there, and there are many people around you, so you feel really connected.

Mixing 'got' and 'you have' is redundant; use one form. 'Register to go there' is unclear—'register to live there' or 'register to enter' is better. Maintain parallel structure. Suggestion: Remove redundancy and clarify the purpose of registering, e.g., 'You have to register to live there.'