Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct plural and article errors (e.g., "high-rise buildings", "my house is surrounded by buildings"). Avoid unclear phrases like "we can't do it"; say why you dislike them.

Exemplo: Yes. My house is surrounded by several high-rise buildings. Because of them, my flat gets less sunlight and the area feels crowded, so I prefer quieter neighbourhoods.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and explain concisely with correct tense and linking words. Replace fillers like "MMM" and avoid repetition. Use a topic sentence and then one reason with an example if needed.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because they are part of my everyday surroundings. For example, I pass the same apartment blocks every morning, so they don't feel special enough to photograph.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct word order and articles, and use linking words to add precise reasons. Avoid repeating phrases like "I would be like". Provide specific details about what appeals to you (e.g., views, height, architecture).

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world. I want to see the panoramic views from the observation deck and admire its impressive architecture.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, structured response with one main reason and a specific supporting detail. Fix grammatical errors and unclear phrases (e.g., "I prefer a house because I value privacy and outdoor space"). Mention past experience briefly if relevant, using correct tense.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I prefer a detached house because it offers more privacy and a garden for my family. I used to live in an apartment and found it noisy and limiting.

× Yes, there are many high rise building near my house and my house currently around with buildings.

✓ Yes, there are many high-rise buildings near my house, and my house is surrounded by buildings.

The original uses singular 'building' after 'many' (plural required). 'High rise' should be hyphenated as 'high-rise' when used as a compound adjective. 'My house currently around with buildings' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'my house is surrounded by buildings.' Use plural agreement and proper passive construction. Suggestion: After quantifiers like 'many' use plural nouns; use 'is surrounded by' to describe being encircled.

× I really don't like it but we can't do it.

✓ I really don't like it, but there is nothing we can do about it.

The original 'we can't do it' is vague and the sentence lacks natural phrasing. Adding 'there is nothing' and 'about it' makes the meaning clear and grammatically correct. Suggestion: Use idiomatic expressions like 'there is nothing we can do about it' to express lack of control.

× Something for this?

✓ Is there anything you can do about this?

'Something for this?' is a fragment and not a complete sentence. Rephrase into a full question with subject and verb: 'Is there anything you can do about this?'. Suggestion: Always include subject and verb to form a proper question.

× MMM no need.

✓ No, I don't need to.

Fragment lacking subject and auxiliary verb. Use modal/auxiliary 'do' for negative present statements: 'I don't need to.' Suggestion: Use complete sentences with subject + auxiliary + main verb.

× What? I'm never take a photo of buildings or apartments because it's my daily life.

✓ No, I never take photos of buildings or apartments because they are part of my daily life.

'I'm never take' mixes present continuous with simple present incorrectly; use simple present 'I never take'. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' after 'take'. Also 'it's my daily life' should be 'they are part of my daily life' to refer to buildings/apartments. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions and match verb number with noun plurality.

× When I was getting out from my home I'll see many buildings in and realize so I don't need to take photos.

✓ When I leave my home I see many buildings and realize I don't need to take photos.

The original mixes past progressive 'was getting out' with future 'I'll see' and has wrong preposition 'out from'. Use simple present 'leave' and 'see' for habitual actions. Remove unnecessary words 'in and' and reorder: 'I see many buildings and realize I don't need to take photos.' Suggestion: Use consistent tense for habitual situations (simple present) and correct prepositions ('leave home').

× Yes, in overall world I would be like to visit one building name is Burj Khalifa.

✓ Yes, in the whole world I would like to visit a building called Burj Khalifa.

'In overall world' is incorrect; use 'in the whole world'. 'I would be like to' is wrong word order; correct is 'I would like to'. 'One building name is' should be 'a building called'. Suggestion: Use natural phrases 'in the whole world', 'would like to', and 'called' for naming.

× It's the tallest building in overall world.

✓ It's the tallest building in the world.

'Overall world' is incorrect; use 'the world'. The rest is fine. Suggestion: Use common collocations like 'in the world'.

× I really like to.

✓ I would really like to.

Fragment missing object or auxiliary; 'I really like to' is incomplete. In context, 'I would really like to' expresses desire to visit. Suggestion: Use 'would like to' for polite expression of wishes.

× I would be like to visit at least one time in my life to Burj Khalifa and see how views from their top of the building.

✓ I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa at least once in my life and see the view from the top of the building.

'Would be like to' incorrect word order; use 'would like to'. 'One time' more natural as 'once'. Preposition 'to Burj Khalifa' should be 'the Burj Khalifa'. 'See how views from their top' is ungrammatical; use 'see the view from the top of the building.' Also 'their' incorrectly refers to building. Suggestion: Use correct article 'the', natural adverb 'once', and proper noun phrases 'view from the top'.

× No, I don't like it.

✓ No, I don't want to live there.

Answer lacks clarity. While 'I don't like it' is grammatical, the question asks 'Do you want to live in a tall building?' A clearer response is 'No, I don't want to live there.' Suggestion: Answer directly with appropriate verb 'want' and place 'there' to refer to tall buildings.

× I really want to live in a house or whole house or home because building it not a just one type of property and not in I'm in my past.

✓ I really want to live in a house or a home because living in a building is not the same as living in a house, and I have lived in a building in the past.

Original is confused and ungrammatical. 'Whole house or home' is redundant; use 'a house or a home'. 'Building it not a just one type of property' is unclear; clarify contrast: 'living in a building is not the same as living in a house.' 'Not in I'm in my past' attempts to say 'I lived in a building in the past.' Suggestion: Use clear comparative structures and correct tense for past experience.

× I'm living in building, but really it's a not a great move from our and my parents.

✓ I lived in a building, but it was not a good experience for me or my parents.

'I'm living in building' misses article and unnatural when referring to past: question context asks desire to live; student refers to past experience, so use past tense 'I lived in a building.' 'It's a not a great move from our and my parents' is ungrammatical; clarify as 'it was not a good experience for me or my parents.' Suggestion: Use proper article 'a building' and match tense to the time referenced; express experience clearly.