Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện sự rõ ràng và ngữ pháp; tránh lỗi đánh máy hoặc từ thiếu. Trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ phù hợp (ví dụ: "because", "for example"). Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "apartments" thay vì "M apartment").

Exemplo: Yes, there are a few tall buildings near my home. They are mostly apartment blocks, offices and shopping centers, and they make the area look more modern because they bring more shops and services.

Sugestão: Sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác; dùng dạng số nhiều/không đếm được đúng ("sometimes"), và sửa cụm từ sai ("interested in architecture"). Thêm liên từ nếu cần để mạch lạc (ví dụ: "because", "so").

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I do. I usually take photos when a building has an interesting design or a beautiful view because I like capturing places that look different from the surrounding neighborhood.

Sugestão: Sửa nhiều lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc; tránh từ không đúng như "tongue skyscraper cropper". Nên nêu rõ tòa nhà và vị trí (ví dụ: "a very tall skyscraper in Ho Chi Minh City"). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và dùng linking word ("for example", "because").

Exemplo: Yes, I'd like to visit a very tall skyscraper in Ho Chi Minh City. For example, going to the top floor would let me enjoy a panoramic view of the city and take some great photos.

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, trật tự từ và từ vựng (ví dụ: "I think it's good"; "good facilities"; "other services"; "very high floors"). Nên có câu chủ đề và 1–2 câu giải thích với liên từ như "because" hoặc "however". Tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Exemplo: I think living in a tall building would be fine, but only if it had good facilities and a pleasant view. It is convenient because shops and other services are usually nearby, but I would avoid very high floors because I might feel uncomfortable with the height.

× Although they aren't extremely high M apartment, office and shopping centers, I think they make the area look more modern and developed.

✓ Although they aren't extremely high, they include apartments, offices, and shopping centers.

The original sentence mixes singular and plural nouns and has word order issues. 'M apartment' is incorrect; use plural nouns to match 'they'. Also list items correctly with commas and plural forms: 'apartments, offices, and shopping centers.' Use a comma after the introductory clause for clarity.

× Yes, sometime. I usually take photos when I see a building with an interesting design or a beautiful view.

✓ Yes, sometimes. I usually take photos when I see a building with an interesting design or a beautiful view.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb) rather than 'sometime' to indicate frequency. 'Sometime' without 's' means at an unspecified time and is incorrect here. This fixes adverb usage for frequency.

× I'm not really estate in architecture, but I like taking pictures of places that look different from the buildings around my neighborhood.

✓ I'm not really interested in architecture, but I like taking pictures of places that look different from the buildings around my neighborhood.

'Estate' is the wrong word; the correct adjective/verb phrase is 'interested in'. Use the preposition 'in' after 'interested'. This corrects word choice and collocation.

× Yes, I'd like to visit a really tongue skyscraper cropper in a major city so that Ho Chi Minh City.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit a really tall skyscraper in a major city such as Ho Chi Minh City.

The original has many wrong words: 'tongue' and 'cropper' are incorrect. Use 'tall skyscraper'. Use 'such as' to give an example city. Ensure noun order is correct: 'a really tall skyscraper.'

× I think it would be interesting to go to the top floor and enjoy the view of the city.

✓ I think it would be interesting to go to the top floor and enjoy the view of the city.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It is retained to show no error of the listed types.

× It could also be a good thing to take some nice photos.

✓ It could also be a good opportunity to take some nice photos.

'A good thing to take' is awkward; 'a good opportunity to take' is the natural collocation. This corrects word choice and idiomatic expression.

× I think I good, but only if the building had a good facilities and a nice view.

✓ I think I would be good, but only if the building had good facilities and a nice view.

Original lacks auxiliary verb and has article/number mismatch: 'I think I good' should be 'I think I would be fine' or 'I would be good'. Use 'good facilities' without 'a' because 'facilities' is plural. Also keep past form 'had' for the conditional clause.

× Living in a tall apartment can be convenient because they are usually shops and others service services nearby.

✓ Living in a tall apartment can be convenient because there are usually shops and other services nearby.

Replace 'they are' with 'there are' to indicate existence (There be issue). Use 'other services' instead of 'others service services'. Correct pluralization and word order. This fixes preposition and existential construction.

× However, I wouldn't want to live on the extremely high floor because I might feel uncomfortable with the high.

✓ However, I wouldn't want to live on an extremely high floor because I might feel uncomfortable with the height.

Use the article 'an' before 'extremely high floor'. Replace 'the high' with 'the height' to use the correct noun. This corrects article usage and wrong noun choice.