BuildingPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Candidato

Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. They are mainly modern office towers and skyscrapers used by large companies in Shenzhen. So the areas looks like a bustling commercial district.

Examinador

Do you take photos of buildings?

Candidato

Yes, I often take photos of the buildings, especially the modern office towers, because their sleek glass facades look impressive and I enjoy capturing their shapes and reflection on my phone when I visit the city.

Examinador

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Candidato

Yes, there are two buildings I'd like to visit. They're located in Benton District of Shenzhen and they have become very popular in social media because of their strange architecture and photo genic appearance. So I'd love to.

Examinador

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Candidato

I prefer not to living in a tall building because I like living close to nature, I enjoy peaceful surroundings and fresh air, and I find high rise city life too crowded and noisy.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 6.0Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Pontuação: 80.0

Sugestão: 回答总体清晰且直接,但存在小错误和冗余。注意主谓一致和单复数(如 "the areas looks" 应为 "the area looks"),避免不必要的重复信息(如已提到 modern office towers 与 skyscrapers 可合并)。可用一两句补充具体细节以丰富内容。

Exemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. Most are modern office towers and skyscrapers occupied by large companies in Shenzhen, so the area looks like a bustling commercial district with busy streets and lots of shops.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Pontuação: 88.0

Sugestão: 回答自然且信息具体,但句子较长,可通过使用连接词使结构更紧凑,并避免重复(如多次出现 "buildings" 和 "modern office towers")。可补充一个具体拍照场景或时间以增强细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of modern office towers because their sleek glass facades look impressive. For example, I usually take photos in the evening when the sunset creates colorful reflections on the glass.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答能传达意图,但存在语法与表达小问题(如 "photo genic" 应为 "photogenic";末句不完整 "So I'd love to." 建议说完整愿望)。可提供更具体原因或描述两座建筑的特色来丰富回答。

Exemplo: Yes, there are two buildings I'd like to visit in Benton District, Shenzhen. They are famous on social media for their unusual, photogenic architecture — one has a twisted glass facade and the other looks like stacked cubes — so I'd love to see and photograph them in person.

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Pontuação: 82.0

Sugestão: 回答表达明确且理由具体,但注意语法("prefer not to living" 应为 "prefer not to live")。句子可更简洁并用连接词改进逻辑衔接,如先给结论再列举原因。

Exemplo: I prefer not to live in a tall building because I like being close to nature. I enjoy peaceful surroundings and fresh air, and I find high-rise city life too crowded and noisy for my taste.

Gramática

Subject-verb agreement errors

× So the areas looks like a bustling commercial district.

So the area looks like a bustling commercial district.

原句中主语是复数形式的 areas,但后文语境指代的是一个区域(a bustling commercial district),应使用单数名词 area 与单数动词 looks 匹配,或者若保留 areas 则动词应为 look。建议判断上下文意指单一区域时改为 area;注意主谓在人称和数上的一致性。

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I prefer not to living in a tall building because I like living close to nature, I enjoy peaceful surroundings and fresh air, and I find high rise city life too crowded and noisy.

Yes, I prefer not to live in a tall building because I like living close to nature; I enjoy peaceful surroundings and fresh air, and I find high-rise city life too crowded and noisy.

原句中 prefer 后面不应加动名词 living,而应接不定式 to + 动词原形(to live),因此应改为 prefer not to live。此外句中 high rise 作为复合形容词修饰 city life 时应连字符写为 high-rise。为改善句子连贯性,建议用分号或分句连接而非逗号拼接多个独立分句。

Vocabulário

CloseNear; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
CrowdedPacked
FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
LargeBig; Abundant; Wide-reaching
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
ModernPresent-day; Fashionable
NoisyRowdy; Loud
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
StrangeUnusual; Weird; Unfamiliar; Ill at ease
TallIn height; Demanding
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