Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Nên tránh lỗi từ vựng và nói lộn (ví dụ 'toy buildings' thay vì 'tall buildings'), giảm tiếng ừ/ứng, và nói câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn (1-3 câu) và dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, instead, but). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách khu vực của bạn khác với tòa nhà cao tầng (ví dụ: không có những tòa nhà chọc trời, nhiều đồng ruộng, không khí trong lành).

Exemplo: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside. Instead, the area is full of natural scenery, such as fields and trees, which makes it very peaceful.

Sugestão: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn, giảm filler (umm), và dùng thì chính xác. Dùng linking words (when, because, so) hợp lý để nối ý. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về lúc nào bạn chụp và mục đích (e.g., for memories or architecture appreciation).

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I visit a city because I find their architecture appealing. For example, last year I photographed several modern skyscrapers to remember their unique designs.

Sugestão: Cần sửa tên địa danh cho chính xác và viết câu tự nhiên hơn, tránh lặp từ như 'have a chance' hai lần. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về lí do (ví dụ: view from observation deck, architecture, history). Giữ câu ngắn và rõ ràng, dùng liên từ như because or because of that.

Exemplo: I would love to visit Landmark 81 because it is the tallest building in my country and offers a spectacular observation deck. I hope to go there someday to enjoy the panoramic views and take photos.

Sugestão: Cần diễn đạt lí do rõ ràng và trôi chảy, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc (ví dụ: 'I'm quite scared of heights' và tránh mâu thuẫn 'not make me feel terrified'). Nên nêu thêm một hoặc hai lý do hỗ trợ (safety concerns, preference for space) và kết luận thẳng thắn. Giữ câu dưới 3 câu.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights and feel uncomfortable on high floors. Also, I prefer a house with a garden and more outdoor space.

× To be honest, they aren't toy buildings near my house because I live in a countryside area.

✓ To be honest, there aren't any tall buildings near my house because I live in the countryside.

'they aren't toy buildings' is incorrect: likely meant 'tall buildings' (word choice). 'They aren't' is awkward here; use 'there aren't' for existence (There be issue - use of definite structure). 'a countryside area' is incorrect article use; 'the countryside' is the correct idiomatic phrase. Also add 'any' after negation. Suggestion: use 'there aren't any tall buildings' and 'the countryside'. Note: This correction addresses article and there-be usage.

× Instead of that, umm we have umm natural beauty with many beautiful views and trees.

✓ Instead, we have natural beauty, many scenic views, and lots of trees.

'Instead of that' is used incorrectly; 'instead' or 'instead of that' followed by a noun phrase is possible but here 'Instead' is more natural. 'natural beauty with many beautiful views' is redundant and awkward. Use parallel structure and appropriate nouns: 'natural beauty, many scenic views, and lots of trees.' Suggestion: simplify and use parallel list for clarity.

× Yes absolutely because I live in a peaceful area so when I have a chance going to big city I will take photos of many tall buildings because it's umm appealing view and I realize the appearance.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Because I live in a peaceful area, when I have a chance to go to a big city I will take photos of many tall buildings because they are appealing to look at and I like their appearance.

Sentence structure and verb forms are incorrect: 'when I have a chance going to big city' should be 'when I have a chance to go to a big city' (correct infinitive after 'have a chance'). 'it's umm appealing view' should be plural subject agreement and correct noun phrase: 'they are appealing to look at' or 'it's an appealing view' depending on focus. 'I realize the appearance' is unnatural; use 'I like their appearance.' Suggestion: use correct infinitive, subject-verb agreement, and natural collocations.

× If I have a chance I want to see the limit 81 because it is the highest building in my country and it is really famous.

✓ If I have a chance, I want to see Landmark 81 because it is the tallest building in my country and it is really famous.

'the limit 81' seems to be a mistranslation or wrong name; likely 'Landmark 81' (proper noun) should be capitalized. 'the highest building' is acceptable but 'the tallest building' is more natural for height. Missing comma after introductory clause. Suggestion: use correct proper noun and 'tallest' for buildings.

× Umm, I hope in the future I could have a chance to see it in real life.

✓ I hope in the future I will have a chance to see it in real life.

Mixing modal and tense: 'I hope ... I could have a chance' is incorrect in this context. Use 'I will have' to express future expectation after 'I hope'. Alternatively 'I could get a chance' is less direct. Suggestion: use 'I hope I will have a chance'.

× To be honest, no, because I'm quite scared of height not make me feel terrified when I go into a tall building.

✓ To be honest, no, because I'm quite scared of heights and I feel terrified when I go into a tall building.

'scared of height' should be 'scared of heights' (plural noun). 'not make me feel terrified' is wrong structure; use 'and I feel terrified' to combine ideas. Also 'go into a tall building' is acceptable but 'enter' or 'go into' both fine. Suggestion: use plural 'heights' and correct conjunction 'and' with proper verb phrase.

× So absolutely not.

✓ So, absolutely not.

This short reply mainly needs punctuation for spoken pause; grammatically okay but add comma. No third-person verb issue present; included for completeness.