Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời khá tự nhiên nhưng nên trực tiếp hơn ở câu chủ đề, tránh lặp ý và thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy rút ngắn để không quá 2–3 câu, dùng liên từ đơn giản nếu muốn mở rộng (for example, because, so). Sửa lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và trật tự từ.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several tall and modern buildings near my home. I often see them when I ride my electric bike, and I especially like the glass-fronted office tower because it shines in the morning sun.

Sugestão: Ý tốt nhưng diễn đạt lủng củng và lặp từ. Nên nói rõ mục đích chụp (memories, architecture, details) và dùng cấu trúc ngắn gọn kèm ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh từ thừa như “these sets like that”.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing buildings to preserve memories and to study architectural details; for example, I often take pictures of old facades and interesting doorways.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp (ví dụ "visit to the Disney Casual"). Nên nêu tên chính xác của nơi, giải thích vì sao muốn đến và miêu tả cụ thể một hoặc hai điều hấp dẫn. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, because, especially).

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit the Disneyland in another country because it has many themed areas and spectacular parades; for example, I want to see the castle at night and the animated light shows.

Sugestão: Ý rõ ràng nhưng phát biểu lặp và lỗi ngữ pháp/diễn đạt ("scares the tall of buildings"). Nên diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn: nói bạn sợ độ cao hoặc thích nhà thấp, và nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: an toàn, yên tĩnh). Giữ tối đa 2–3 câu.

Exemplo: I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights and I prefer quieter, low-rise neighborhoods; for example, I feel safer and closer to nature in a small apartment or house.

× I love taking photos of buildings because I want to keep these photos up, these sets like that to keep memories.

✓ I love taking photos of buildings because I want to keep these photos to preserve memories.

The phrase 'keep these photos up, these sets like that' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use the gerund 'taking' correctly and replace the unclear expression with 'to preserve memories' which clearly expresses purpose. Suggestion: simplify purpose clauses with 'to' + verb phrase and avoid redundant words.

× Yes, of course I would like to visit to the Disney Casual which is built in different country, not my old country.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to visit the Disney Castle which is built in a different country, not my home country.

Errors: unnecessary 'to' after 'visit' (visit is followed directly by noun), incorrect noun 'Casual' likely intended 'Castle', missing article 'a' before 'different country', and awkward 'old country' should be 'home country'. Suggestions: use 'visit' + noun, include articles where needed, and choose correct vocabulary.

× You know, there are lots of beautiful scenes in there.

✓ You know, there are lots of beautiful scenes there.

The preposition 'in' before 'there' is unnecessary and ungrammatical in this context. Use 'there' alone to indicate location. Suggestion: say 'scenes there' or 'scenes inside' if you mean inside a place.

× Honestly, I don't really want to live in a tall building because I'm a person who really scares the tall of buildings, so I prefer live in a short building rather than tall building.

✓ Honestly, I don't really want to live in a tall building because I'm a person who is really scared of tall buildings, so I prefer to live in a short building rather than a tall one.

Multiple issues: 'scares the tall of buildings' is ungrammatical—use 'scared of' to express fear. Missing 'to' in 'prefer to live'. Articles missing before 'short building' and 'tall building'; use 'a' and replace the second noun with 'one' to avoid repetition. Suggestions: use correct adjective + preposition 'scared of', include 'to' after 'prefer', and use articles.

× There are some beautiful buildings near my home.

✓ There are some beautiful buildings near my home.

Sentence is correct; no article errors. Included here for completeness: 'some' correctly indicates plural indefinite quantity. No change needed.

× I often see them when I ride my electric bike.

✓ I often see them when I ride my electric bike.

Sentence is correct. The clause structure is fine and matches the present habitual tense. No change needed.

× Yes I do. I love taking photos of buildings because I want to keep these photos up, these sets like that to keep memories.

✓ Yes, I do. I love taking photos of buildings because I want to keep these photos to preserve memories.

Added comma after 'Yes' for natural rhythm. Replaced awkward phrase as above. Modal usage 'do' is fine. Suggestion: keep replies concise and use appropriate purpose clauses.

× Are there tall buildings near your home?

✓ Are there tall buildings near your home?

Question is grammatically correct using 'there are' inversion for questions. No change needed.