Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence answering directly, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition and fix subject-verb agreement and word order.

Exemplo: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. Most high-rises are located in big cities, so the houses here are mostly single- or two-storey buildings with traditional roofs.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so). Avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence variety and grammar.

Exemplo: I usually only take photos of buildings when I visit big cities because their modern architecture is impressive. For example, I photograph façades and unique shapes to remember the design and to share them on social media.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement of which building and why, and give one specific detail about what interests you. Avoid vague phrases and repeated expressions like "once in a life."

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Shanghai Tower because I am fascinated by its twisting design and panoramic observation decks. I would also like to see the Marina Bay Sands in Singapore because of its rooftop infinity pool and striking silhouette.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, then explain one or two clear reasons with examples. Reduce hesitations and repetition, and correct grammar (e.g., 'flats or apartments' and consistent tense).

Exemplo: Yes, I would prefer to live in a tall building because I like apartment living and the efficient use of space. For instance, apartments often have shared facilities and good views, and I would like one on a hillside for the scenery.

× The buildings in my area is not at all because the tall buildings are usually in big cities in my country and the buildings near to my home is not at all comparatively the buildings building big cities.

✓ The buildings in my area are not tall at all because tall buildings are usually in big cities in my country, and the buildings near my home are not comparable to those in big cities.

Error: plural noun 'buildings' requires plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement) and plural pronoun references. Also phrasing 'not at all comparatively the buildings building big cities' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use 'are not tall at all' and 'not comparable to those in big cities' for clear comparison.

× the buildings near to my home is not at all comparatively the buildings building big cities.

✓ the buildings near my home are not comparable to those in big cities.

Error: unnecessary preposition 'to' after 'near' and awkward comparative phrasing. Use 'near my home' and 'comparable to those in big cities' to express the comparison correctly.

× Just when I go to big cities that I have, we have no at all.

✓ I only take photos when I go to big cities, since we don't have tall buildings in my area.

Error: fragmented and unclear structure 'that I have, we have no at all.' Reorganize sentence to show condition and reason: 'I only take photos when I go to big cities' and explain why with a clear clause.

× Buildings in my area are beautiful, are well structured buildings in my area.

✓ The buildings in my area are beautiful and well structured.

Error: redundant and repetitive phrasing 'are beautiful, are well structured buildings in my area.' Combine adjectives with 'and' and avoid repeating the subject.

× So when I go to big cities, I definitely I absolutely take pictures of tall buildings because of their architecture.

✓ So when I go to big cities, I definitely take pictures of tall buildings because of their architecture.

Error: unnecessary repetition 'I definitely I absolutely.' Remove one adverb for fluency. The verb form 'take' is correct; the issue is redundancy rather than third person, but correction improves sentence.

× These buildings are so good in structure.

✓ These buildings have excellent structures.

Error: awkward collocation 'good in structure.' Use 'have excellent structures' or 'are well designed' to express quality of construction.

× That's why I take pictures and make memories.

✓ That's why I take pictures to remember them.

Error: 'make memories' is acceptable colloquially but less precise; 'take pictures to remember them' is clearer and more natural.

× I would like to visit Shanghai Tower once in a life because the overall architecture is so fascinating and incredible and I like to have visit it once in a life.

✓ I would like to visit Shanghai Tower once in my life because the overall architecture is fascinating, and I would like to visit it at least once.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'once in a life' should be 'once in my life.' 'Like to have visit' is ungrammatical; use 'would like to visit' or 'would like to have visited' depending on meaning. Simplify and use correct infinitive forms.

× And the other building is in Singapore. I don't remember his name, but I if I got a chance, I will definitely visit that building in my life.

✓ Another building is in Singapore. I don't remember its name, but if I get the chance, I will definitely visit it in my life.

Errors: use of 'his' for a building is incorrect; use 'its.' Tense/mood: 'if I got a chance' should be 'if I get the chance' for a realistic future condition, and 'will' fits the future intention. Remove extra 'I'.

× Uh, yes, uh, I like flats and apartments to live as compared to big houses because I enjoyed the overall structure of apartments and flats of tall building as compared to the houses.

✓ Yes, I prefer flats and apartments to big houses because I enjoy the layout and structure of apartments in tall buildings more than houses.

Errors: awkward infinitive 'to live as compared to' and tense inconsistency 'enjoyed' (past) vs present preference. Use 'prefer' and present tense 'enjoy' and correct comparative structure 'more than.'

× And definitely if I got a chance to live in A to buy a house, I will definitely go for a flat or apartments and most probably in a hilly area.

✓ If I get a chance to buy a house, I will definitely choose a flat or apartment, most likely in a hilly area.

Errors: mixed and confusing structure 'to live in A to buy a house.' Use 'get a chance to buy a house' and choose singular 'apartment' to match article 'a flat or apartment.' Use consistent future tense 'will' and simplify wording.