Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 질문에 직접 답한 뒤 문법과 어휘를 정확하게 고치고, 추가 정보를 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어 시제와 동사 사용(‘could saw’ → ‘can see’)을 바로잡고, 연결어구(예: 'for example', 'such as')를 적절히 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요. 또한 구체적인 거리나 위치(예: 'a few blocks away', 'across the street')를 덧붙이면 답변이 더 풍부해집니다.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home, mostly banks and public institutions. I can often see them from my window, since they are only a few blocks away. For example, there is a tall government office building right across the street that stands out.

Sugestão: 답변은 비교적 자연스럽지만 채우는 표현(‘uh’)을 줄이고 더 구체적인 이유와 빈도를 제시하세요. 연결어를 사용해 이유와 예시를 깔끔하게 연결하고, 사진을 찍는 상황(예: 여행 중, 출퇴근길)이나 목적(예: 건축에 대한 관심, 소셜미디어 공유)을 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I take photos of interesting or beautiful buildings, especially when their design is unusual. For instance, I once photographed an eye-shaped building while I was walking home because I found its façade very striking and wanted to share it on social media.

Sugestão: 문법(‘that I set recently’ → unclear, ‘building with eyes are’ → subject-verb agreement)과 표현을 정리하세요. 먼저 명확한 주제문으로 답하고, 왜 방문하고 싶은지 구체적 이유(건축 스타일, 역사, 디자이너 등)를 덧붙이세요. 연결어(‘because’, ‘because of’, ‘for example’)를 사용해 논리를 강화하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the eye-shaped building I mentioned earlier because its design seems very unique. I am curious about how the architect created that façade and I would like to see the interior details in person.

Sugestão: 의견은 분명하지만 문장 연결과 문법(‘I am living in the 10th floor’ → 'on the 10th floor', 'quite. Tall' → 'quite tall')을 고치고 이유를 좀 더 구체적으로 설명하세요. 예를 들어 안전, 불편함, 공포증 같은 개인적 이유나 장단점을 비교하는 표현을 추가하면 좋습니다.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a very tall building. I already live on the 10th floor, and I find it quite high, which makes me uncomfortable. For example, I worry about elevators and feel uneasy during storms, so I prefer a lower floor.

× I always could saw the buildings from my window.

✓ I could always see the buildings from my window.

The sentence uses the incorrect past-tense form 'saw' together with modal 'could' plus base verb structure. After 'could' we should use the base form of the verb (see), and the adverb 'always' is more natural after 'could' or before the verb: 'could always see'. Also word order improved for fluency.

× For example, there are, uh, eye shaped buildings.

✓ For example, there are, uh, eye-shaped buildings.

The compound adjective 'eye-shaped' should be hyphenated when placed before a noun. This is an article/word-formation style issue; adding the hyphen clarifies the modifier relationship. No article change needed because 'buildings' is plural.

× Yes, actually I want to visit that building that I set recently.

✓ Yes, actually I want to visit the building that I saw recently.

The verb 'set' is incorrect here; the speaker likely meant 'saw' (past tense of see) because they previously saw the building. Use the past tense 'saw' for a completed action. This matches the time reference 'recently'.

× The building with eyes are quite impressive to me.

✓ The building with eyes is quite impressive to me.

The subject 'the building' is singular, so the verb must be singular 'is' not 'are'. This is a subject-verb agreement error. Keep 'quite impressive to me' as the complement.

× I am living in the 10th floor of my apartment.

✓ I am living on the 10th floor of my apartment.

When referring to floors in a building, the correct preposition is 'on' (not 'in'). So use 'on the 10th floor'. Additionally, 'the' is correct before ordinal '10th'.

× I think it's quite. Tall, so I don't want to.

✓ I think it's quite tall, so I don't want to.

The original has an incorrect sentence break and punctuation ('quite.' then 'Tall,'). Combine into one clause: 'quite tall' is the correct adjective phrase. This fixes sentence structure and punctuation.