Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if needed.

Exemplo: Not many. I live in a suburban area, so there aren’t many tall buildings nearby; mostly there are low-rise apartments and houses. For example, the tallest buildings around me are three- or four-storey blocks near the main road.

Sugestão: Respond directly with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and concise supporting detail. Use linking words and be specific about when or why you photograph buildings.

Exemplo: Not usually. However, I sometimes take photos of famous buildings when I visit the city center, especially if the architecture is interesting or I want to share it on social media.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct minor grammar and be more natural with phrasing.

Exemplo: Not really, but if I had the chance I would visit Landmark 81 in District 2 because it is the tallest building in the city and offers great views from the observation deck. Also, I’d like to see the modern design up close.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct unclear words and grammar, and give a specific reason using linking words. Avoid confusing expressions and be concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I would, but I’d prefer a mid-level floor such as the fifth. It’s more convenient for daily movement and safer during power outages compared with very high floors.

× Not many because my living area is a suburban so there is not many tall buildings near nearby, just some apartments.

✓ Not many because my living area is suburban, so there are not many tall buildings nearby; just some apartments.

Errors: incorrect article 'a suburban' (should be adjective 'suburban' without 'a') and subject-verb agreement with 'there are not many' for plural 'tall buildings'. Also redundant 'near nearby' and punctuation. Suggestion: remove the article before 'suburban', use 'there are' for plural, and use 'nearby' alone. Use a comma or semicolon to join clauses.

× Not usually, especially some famous buildings located at Central I sometime I check for those them.

✓ Not usually. Especially some famous buildings in Central — I sometimes check for those.

Errors: word order and incorrect tense/adverb placement. 'Located at Central' should be 'in Central' (preposition error) and 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Also 'for those them' is redundant pronoun use. Suggestion: use 'in Central', place 'sometimes' correctly, and use only one pronoun ('those').

× Not really, but if I have a chance I think I would visit the Landmark 81 located at District 2.

✓ Not really, but if I have the chance I think I would visit Landmark 81 in District 2.

Errors: article and preposition use: 'a chance' can be acceptable but 'the chance' fits conditional context better; 'located at District 2' should be 'in District 2'. Also drop 'the' before Landmark 81. Suggestion: use 'the chance' for a specific hypothetical opportunity and 'in' for locations like districts.

× Yes I do, but olive I could live with a low flock like on the 5th floor.

✓ Yes I do, but I could live on a lower floor, like the 5th floor.

Errors: 'olive' is incorrect word (likely mispronounced 'or' or 'also'); 'low flock' is incorrect vocabulary for 'lower floor'; preposition 'on' is correct before floor; comparison form 'lower' needed. Suggestion: use 'I could live on a lower floor' and replace wrong words with correct vocabulary.

× It's more convenient to move than a higher floor.

✓ It's more convenient to move around than on a higher floor.

Errors: missing preposition 'on' before 'a higher floor' and awkward comparison structure. Use 'move around' for mobility and include 'on' to indicate location. Suggestion: rephrase to 'It's more convenient to move around than on a higher floor.'