Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần nói rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn; sửa ngữ pháp và phát âm; tổ chức ý theo câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung chi tiết liên kết. Ví dụ: bắt đầu bằng câu trực tiếp trả lời “Yes, there is…”; dùng thì đúng (e.g., ‘under construction’), và thay các cụm từ mơ hồ bằng thông tin cụ thể (vị trí, mục đích, thời gian).

Exemplo: Yes, there is a tall building near my home called Lamech. It is currently under construction and is expected to be finished in about six months. When completed, it will serve as a central shopping mall for the neighborhood, which should make the area more convenient for residents.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn, tránh câu dài lủng củng; sử dụng liên từ thích hợp và từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., 'architecture', 'landscapes', 'selfies'). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về khi nào bạn chụp ảnh để làm rõ ý.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings. I prefer taking selfies with friends, especially when we visit interesting places. Sometimes I photograph landscapes, but I rarely focus on architecture unless it looks particularly impressive.

Sugestão: Cần có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và diễn giải lý do cụ thể bằng cách dùng liên từ hợp lý; sửa lỗi từ vựng như 'luxurious places' và dùng động từ phù hợp ('visit' thay vì 'play'). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về điều muốn làm ở đó (ví dụ: ngắm cảnh, ăn tối, mua sắm).

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81 because it is the tallest building in Vietnam. There are many luxurious shops and restaurants inside, so I would like to go up to the observation deck to enjoy the view and perhaps have dinner at a nice restaurant.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc; sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I don't want to' → 'I don't want to live in a tall building') và tránh lặp từ; phát triển lý do với ví dụ cụ thể (riêng tư, tiếng ồn, không gian ngoài trời).

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I prefer a house because it offers more privacy and usually less noise from neighbors. For example, living in a house often means having a garden and outdoor space where I can relax without being disturbed.

× Of year, of course there's one named Lamech. Uh, it's on the it's in the progress to contribute and complete well within around six months we will be able to attend into the building. It will become a central mall.

✓ Of course, there's one named Lamech. It's in progress and will be completed in around six months, and we will be able to enter the building. It will become a central mall.

The original contains several sentence structure and word choice problems: 'Of year' is incorrect and should be 'Of course'; 'on the it's in the progress to contribute' is ungrammatical and should be simplified to 'it's in progress'; 'to contribute' is wrong here; 'complete well within around six months' should be 'will be completed in around six months'; 'attend into the building' is incorrect verb and preposition — use 'enter the building'. Combine clauses clearly and use correct verb forms. Suggested improvement: speak in shorter clear clauses, choose correct verbs (complete, enter), and remove redundant words. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Actually, no, I don't have a habit of taking photos of buildings or something like skies or which is a formula. I just always take photos of myself, a selfie such as selfie photos and I just.

✓ Actually, no, I don't have a habit of taking photos of buildings or the sky. I usually take photos of myself, like selfies.

Errors include awkward phrases and wrong noun forms: 'skies' can be 'the sky' when speaking generally; 'which is a formula' is meaningless and should be removed; 'I just always' is redundant — use 'I usually'; 'selfie such as selfie photos' is repetitive — use 'like selfies'. Improve by using standard adverbs of frequency (usually) and concise nouns. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yeah, of course there is a building called Landmark 81 and because this is the highest building in Vietnam and there are so many luxuries places there in there, therefore I wanna play, I wanna go there.

✓ Yes, of course. There is a building called Landmark 81; it is the tallest building in Vietnam and there are many luxury places there, so I want to go there.

Multiple issues: 'because... and therefore' is redundant; use either 'so' or 'because' to connect clauses. 'Highest' should be 'tallest' for buildings; 'luxuries places' should be 'luxury places'; 'there in there' is redundant. 'wanna play' is informal and incorrect in this context — use 'want to go'. Improve by choosing correct comparative adjective (tallest), correct noun form (luxury), and clearer connectors. Grammar problem type ID:6

× No, I don't want I will let you live in a house because I prefer more privacy and I don't want to be disturbed by people.

✓ No, I don't. I would like to live in a house because I prefer more privacy and I don't want to be disturbed by people.

Original mixes forms: 'No, I don't want I will let you live' is ungrammatical. Use 'No, I don't' or 'No, I wouldn't' to answer. 'I will let you live' is irrelevant; likely intended 'I would like to live'. Use 'would like' for preference. Improve by separating the negative answer and the explanation into clear sentences and using correct modal phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:8

× For example, living in a house mean usually means less noise. Therefore I always choose to live in a house instead of an apartment.

✓ For example, living in a house usually means less noise. Therefore I always choose to live in a house instead of an apartment.

Redundancy and word order issues: 'mean usually means' repeats verbs; keep one: 'usually means'. Otherwise sentence is fine. Suggestion: use 'usually means' and avoid repeating words. Grammar problem type ID:26