Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, umm), and use logical linking to explain why shops are lower. Provide one or two specific details.

Exemplo: Yes. There are several tall apartment buildings near my home. The ground floors usually have small shops, but most commercial areas are lower-rise, while the apartments rise above them.

Sugestão: Improve grammar, vocabulary and reduce hesitations. Use a clear reason and one specific example of what you photograph and why. Replace fillers with linking words like 'because' or 'for example.'

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings because modern architecture often looks artistic and aesthetically pleasing. For example, I like capturing the glass facades of office towers at sunset because the light creates interesting reflections.

Sugestão: Organize your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details. Remove hesitations, correct grammar, and be specific about what you want to see. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example.'

Exemplo: Yes. I would like to visit the 101 Tower in Hong Kong because it is very tall and offers panoramic views of the city. I want to go to the observation deck and take striking photos of the skyline, especially at dusk.

Sugestão: Make a concise opinion with clear reasons and one example. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking phrases like 'because' and 'for example' and correct collocations ('high-rise building', 'ground floor', 'security').

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't want to live in a high-rise building because although they are great for photography, I find lower floors more practical and secure. For example, living on the ground floor would make it easier to get outside quickly and feel safer.

× Most of them are uh, apartments.

✓ Most of them are apartments.

No grammatical change needed; keep plural noun 'apartments' to agree with plural subject 'most of them'. Remove filler words for clarity.

× Uh, because usually, uh, uh, shopping market shopping stores are lower umm, than, than uh, umm, than apartments.

✓ Usually, shopping markets and stores are lower than apartments.

Original sentence has disfluencies and repeated words causing sentence structure errors. Correct by removing fillers, using parallel nouns 'shopping markets and stores', and keeping comparative structure 'lower than apartments'. This fits present simple general statement.

× Yes, I like take photos of buildings because most modern buildings uh, uh, looks uh arti artistic and full of anesthetic.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of buildings because most modern buildings look artistic and full of aesthetic value.

After 'like' use gerund 'taking' (verb + -ing). Also subject-verb agreement: plural 'buildings' requires verb 'look' (not 'looks'). 'Anesthetic' is incorrect word choice; use 'aesthetic' or 'aesthetic value'. Remove fillers.

× Uh, they give me a sense of beauty.

✓ They give me a sense of beauty.

This sentence is correct grammatically. No change needed; plural subject 'they' matches plural verb 'give'.

× Uh yes, I know, uh, uh, there is a tall building called uh, uh, 101 tower in, in uh uh, Hong Kong and it's very tall and has have a great view of the victory by I uh, I umm, I really wanted to go to uh the.

✓ Yes, there is a tall building called 101 Tower in Hong Kong; it is very tall and has a great view of the city. I really want to go there.

Remove fillers and fix 'there is' usage to introduce existence of the building. 'Has have' is incorrect — use single verb 'has' for third-person singular. 'View of the victory by' is unclear; likely 'view of the city'. Change tense to present desire 'I really want to go there' for coherence with questioning about a building to visit.

× And take some striking, beautiful striking, some striking views.

✓ And take some strikingly beautiful photos of the views.

Original is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use gerund/infinitive structure after 'to': 'to take'. Here as continuation 'and take' is fine but clarify object: 'strikingly beautiful photos of the views'. Use adverb 'strikingly' to modify 'beautiful' or reorder to 'striking, beautiful views'.

× I don't want to live in top building because I think a tall building is is perfect for taking for taking pictures, but it's not suitable for living.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building because I think a tall building is perfect for taking pictures, but it's not suitable for living.

Missing indefinite article before 'top building' — change to 'a tall building'. Remove duplicate 'is' and duplicate phrase 'for taking'. Maintain consistent article usage.

× I prefer living on the low floor with high safe safe security.

✓ I prefer living on a low floor with good security.

Use 'a low floor' (article and adjective order) rather than 'the low floor'. 'High safe safe security' is redundant and awkward; use 'good security' or 'high security'. Remove repetition 'safe safe'.