Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more accurate and natural: use correct number expression and article/noun forms, and give a brief description to make the answer more informative. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, there are about a dozen tall buildings near my home. For example, Korea University and the Cookman Bank have multi-storey towers, and there is also a large children's hospital a few blocks away.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and coherence: correct tense and condition phrasing, avoid redundancy, and add a linking phrase to explain why you prefer those conditions. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings, especially in rain or snow, because the wet surfaces and reflections make them look dramatic. It also helps me relax and forget about daily stresses for a short time.

Sugestão: Make the topic sentence clearer and correct article use; add a specific reason or detail about what you want to see to enrich the answer. Use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes — in Korea I'd like to visit Lotte Tower because it's one of the tallest buildings in the country. From the observation deck you can see panoramic views of Seoul, which is what I’m most excited about.

Sugestão: Finish your ideas and avoid filler words. Give concrete reasons (views, facilities, convenience) and use precise vocabulary. Limit to 2–3 clear sentences and use linking words to connect reason and preference.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall skyscraper because it usually offers great views and modern amenities. Also, high-rise buildings often have convenient facilities like gyms and security, which I appreciate.

× Actually, there are some 12 buildings near our home, for example Korea University, the Cookman Bank and Children Hospital.

✓ Actually, there are about 12 buildings near our home, for example Korea University, Cookman Bank and the Children's Hospital.

Use 'about' instead of 'some' with a specific number; 'the' is needed before 'Children's Hospital' and possessive form 'Children's' is correct; remove 'the' before proper names like 'Cookman Bank' unless part of official name. Also 'some 12' is unnatural in English. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× I really enjoy taking photos, especially when it's raining or snowed because they look very breathtaking and I just love this view.

✓ I really enjoy taking photos, especially when it's raining or snowing, because they look breathtaking and I just love the view.

'Snowed' is the past form and incorrect here; use the present participle 'snowing' after 'when it's'. 'Breathtaking' does not need 'very' (optional) and 'the view' is more natural than 'this view' when speaking generally. This falls under present participle use and adjective/adverb choice. Grammar Problem Type ID: 10

× It helps me to escape from reality for a while by taking.

✓ It helps me escape from reality for a while by taking photos.

The verb phrase 'by taking' needs an object; add 'photos' to complete the gerund phrase. Also 'to escape' and 'escape' are both possible; 'helps me escape' is more natural. This is a sentence structure error (missing object). Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× In Korea, actually I would like to visit Lotte Tower which is very high and famous building.

✓ In Korea, I would like to visit Lotte Tower, which is a very tall and famous building.

Insert 'a' before 'very tall and famous building' because a singular countable noun requires an article. Also change 'high' to 'tall' when describing buildings and add a comma before the relative clause. This is an article error. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× I love seeing other areas by this building.

✓ I love seeing the surrounding areas from this building.

Use 'from' to indicate viewpoint and 'surrounding areas' is more natural than 'other areas by this building'. 'The' is needed before 'surrounding areas'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and articles. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× Yeah, absolutely. I would like to live in this kind of building because, you know, I really love modern and tall sky skyscraper because they offer.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. I would like to live in a building like that because I really love modern, tall skyscrapers and what they offer.

'This kind of building' is awkward; 'a building like that' or 'that kind of building' is better. Use 'a' before singular countable noun. 'Modern, tall skyscrapers' should be plural to match 'they', and 'what they offer' completes the clause; the original sentence ends abruptly. This involves incorrect use of determiners/articles and sentence structure. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22