Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答信息量较多，但表达有些冗长与语法不够自然。建议：1) 开头直接回答并用一句话给出地点（Topic sentence）；2) 用1–2句具体而简洁的支持细节（例如：楼高、用途或典型位置）；3) 注意词汇搭配和语法（例如把“economy is very popular”改为“the economy is booming”）。

Exemplo: Yes. I live in Shenzhen, which is a modern city with many skyscrapers. Most of these tall buildings are offices and luxury apartments concentrated in the downtown area.

Sugestão: 回答太含糊且有语法与表达错误。建议：1) 直接回答（Yes/No）并给出一到两条明确理由；2) 使用连词（because, so, however）使逻辑清晰；3) 避免不自然的短语，改用常见表达（e.g. “I’m not very interested in architecture”）。

Exemplo: No, I don't usually photograph buildings because I'm not very interested in architecture and I prefer taking pictures of people or nature. So I rarely take photos of cityscapes.

Sugestão: 回答目标明确且有个人理由，但部分句子冗长且语法小错误。建议：1) 用一到两句表达愿望和原因；2) 用连词简洁连接细节，并给出更具体的期待（例如想登塔顶或拍照）；3) 修正不自然表达（“for a lot of times” → “many times”）。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower. I have seen it many times in textbooks and movies, and I want to see the view from the top and experience its romantic atmosphere in person.

Sugestão: 回答简短并给出理由，但表达不够自然且有夸张或模糊的说法。建议：1) 开头直接回答并简短说明原因；2) 用具体例子说明高楼的优点（view, facilities, convenience）；3) 避免夸张或模糊的表述（“see the whole world”改为“enjoy a wide city view”）。

Exemplo: Yes. I prefer living in a tall building because it feels modern and often offers great views. For example, from a high floor you can enjoy wide city views and less street noise.

× Of course, I live in a modern city called Shenzhen, and in Shenzhen there are skyscrapers everywhere because the economy is very popular and we share a good life, so we often have many advanced buildings around houses.

✓ Of course. I live in a modern city called Shenzhen, and in Shenzhen there are skyscrapers everywhere because the economy is very strong and we enjoy a good standard of living, so we often have many modern buildings around our homes.

问题类型：There be（存在句）和词语搭配错误。句中“the economy is very popular”用词错误，应为“the economy is very strong”（经济发达）。“share a good life”搭配不当，改为“enjoy a good standard of living”。“around houses”不符合英语习惯，应为“around our homes”。同时用逗号和句号分割使句子更清晰。建议：多学习常用短语搭配（strong economy，enjoy a good life/standard of living，around our homes）。

× No, I don't. I think it's maybe because I don't prefer buildings or it's because I don't like sharing views with my family or friends. And also I don't have the appra appreciation for buildings because I think they are for the living and not for the site.

✓ No, I don't. I think it's maybe because I don't prefer buildings, or because I don't like sharing photos with my family or friends. Also I don't have an appreciation for buildings because I think they are for living, not for sightseeing.

问题类型：介词和词语搭配错误。原句“sharing views”在此语境中不自然，应为“sharing photos”；“appra appreciation”是拼写错误并且需要不定冠词“an appreciation”；“for the living and not for the site”表意不清，应改为“for living, not for sightseeing”。建议：注意常用名词搭配（share photos，have an appreciation，sightseeing），检查拼写并用简洁明确的短语表达。

× Of course, I'd like to visit the Eiffel Tower in the future. I saw it in my textbooks for a lot of times and I have always been wondering how it really looks like in the real life. And I know that the Eiffel Tower is a romantic place for people to go to and I would like to feel the atmosphere by myself.

✓ Of course, I'd like to visit the Eiffel Tower in the future. I have seen it in my textbooks many times and I have always wondered what it really looks like in real life. I know that the Eiffel Tower is a romantic place for people to visit and I would like to experience the atmosphere myself.

问题类型：现在时态和句式问题。原句“I saw it in my textbooks for a lot of times”时态不当且搭配生硬，应使用现在完成时“have seen... many times”。“have always been wondering how it really looks like”应改为“have always wondered what it really looks like”（不用been wondering并避免双重宾语结构和like重复）。“in the real life”应为“in real life”。“feel the atmosphere by myself”更自然为“experience the atmosphere myself”。建议：掌握现在完成时的用法（表示过去发生并对现在有影响的经历），用简单结构表达感受（wonder what..., experience）。

× Yes I do. I like tall buildings personally because it looks modern and also if you live in a tall building you can see the whole world clearly in a special site.

✓ Yes, I do. I like tall buildings personally because they look modern, and also if you live in a tall building you can see the surrounding area clearly from a special site.

问题类型：主谓一致和词语选择错误。原句“it looks modern”主语应与“tall buildings”一致，改为“they look modern”。“see the whole world clearly”夸张且不自然，改为“see the surrounding area clearly”。“in a special site”用法不当，应为“from a special site”或更自然的表达。建议：注意复数主语要用复数动词形式，避免字面翻译，使用更自然的地点介词（from）。