Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural, grammatically correct and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct singular/plural and grammar (e.g. 'some buildings', 'they can'), and give one specific reason or example. Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences) and use a linking word when adding a reason.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home in the city. For example, a historic tower and a modern office block stand close by. Because of their architecture, they help visitors learn about the local culture and history. Moreover, I often enjoy walking past them when I go to the market.

Sugestão: Make your answer more fluent and precise. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific reason and an example. Correct grammar and phrasing (e.g. 'take pictures', 'keeps memories', 'improves my creativity or observation'). Avoid vague statements like 'we can improve my in thinking.'

Exemplo: Yes, I often take pictures of interesting buildings. I take photos to keep memories and because I enjoy photography as a hobby. For instance, when I see unusual facades or decorations I will photograph them to study the details later and to improve my creativity.

Sugestão: Provide a clearer direct response and expand slightly with a reason. Correct grammar (e.g. 'I'm not really a fan of going somewhere', 'I'd rather stay in my comfort zone') and use a linking word to explain why. Offering a brief alternative (e.g. a type of building) would enrich the answer.

Exemplo: To be honest, not at the moment; I'm not really a fan of travelling to new places. Because I prefer staying in my comfort zone, I don't have a specific building I want to visit. However, if I had to choose, I might visit a nearby cathedral to see its architecture.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion first, then add one or two clear reasons with correct grammar. Use linking words ('however', 'because') and be specific about pros and cons (e.g. view, convenience, noise). Keep sentences natural and concise.

Exemplo: It depends on the building, but I wouldn't mind living in a tall apartment building. For example, if it is well-designed and safe, the high floors offer great views and more sunlight. However, I might worry about noise and long elevator waits, so I would choose a building with good facilities.

× Yes, I see some building near my location in the city.

✓ Yes, I see some buildings near my location in the city.

The noun 'building' is countable and refers to multiple items indicated by 'some', so it must be plural 'buildings'. Use plural with 'some' to match number. Suggestion: Use 'some buildings' or 'a building' depending on meaning.

× I think it's quite good because it's can let the people know the culture.

✓ I think it's quite good because it can help people learn about the culture.

'It's can' is incorrect because 'it' as a subject cannot take both the contraction 'it's' (it is) and the modal 'can'. Also 'let the people know the culture' is awkward: use 'help people learn about the culture'. Suggestion: Use 'it can' + base verb, and prefer 'help people learn about'.

× I do. I like to take picture especially when I see something special.

✓ I do. I like to take pictures, especially when I see something special.

'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' after 'take' when referring to photos in general. Also add a comma before 'especially'. Suggestion: Use plural for countable nouns when talking generally.

× It is good to keep as a memory.

✓ It is good to keep as a memory.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but sounds more natural as 'It is good to keep as a memory' or 'It is good to keep as a memento.' No change required unless preferring alternative wording. Suggestion: Consider 'keep as a memento' for naturalness.

× Beside that, taking picture also is a kind of a hobby.

✓ Besides that, taking pictures is also a kind of hobby.

Use 'Besides' not 'Beside' for 'in addition'. 'Taking pictures' needs plural and 'is also a kind of hobby' should not include the article 'a' before 'hobby' when using 'a kind of'; 'a kind of hobby' is possible but 'kind of a hobby' is less formal. Also word order: 'is also' not 'also is'. Suggestion: 'Besides that, taking pictures is also a kind of hobby.'

× We can improve my in thinking.

✓ Taking pictures can improve my thinking.

Original has incorrect pronoun 'my' and wrong word order. Recast sentence to make subject clear: 'Taking pictures can improve my thinking' or 'It can improve my thinking'. Suggestion: Identify the subject and use the correct possessive pronoun.

× To be honest, not at the moment.

✓ To be honest, not at the moment.

This fragment is acceptable in spoken English as a short answer. No change required. Suggestion: For a full sentence: 'To be honest, I don't have any at the moment.'

× I'm not really fan of going to somewhere, I rather to stay in my comfort zone.

✓ I'm not really a fan of going somewhere; I'd rather stay in my comfort zone.

Missing article 'a' before 'fan'. 'Going to somewhere' is incorrect; use 'going somewhere'. 'I rather to stay' is wrong: use contraction 'I'd rather stay' or 'I would rather stay' without 'to'. Use semicolon or period to separate clauses. Suggestion: 'I'm not really a fan of going somewhere. I'd rather stay in my comfort zone.'

× Depends on what kind of building is for the living area or I don't mind to live in.

✓ It depends on what kind of building it is for living, but I don't mind living in one.

Fragment missing subject 'It'. 'for the living area' is awkward—use 'for living' or 'as a residential building'. 'I don't mind to live in' should be 'I don't mind living in' (gerund after 'mind'). Suggestion: Start with 'It depends' and use correct verb forms.

× The tall building is for the hotel, that's fine too.

✓ If the tall building is a hotel, that's fine too.

Original 'The tall building is for the hotel' is unclear. Use 'a hotel' to describe type. Also combine clauses with clear condition 'If...'. Suggestion: 'If the tall building is a hotel, that's fine too.'

× I think it's quite good because I can see a different view from atop.

✓ I think it's quite good because I can see a different view from the top.

'From atop' is nonstandard in this context; use 'from the top' or 'from atop the building'. Suggestion: Use 'from the top' or 'from atop the building' for clarity.